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Valkyrie402
11-25-2006, 07:21 PM
A wounded heart stirs,
A soul hears an echo of hope in the void,
A flame flickers to life in the darknesss....
Talia
11-25-2006, 07:24 PM
short and sweet....and hope someday that turns into a blaze.
Timberwolf
11-25-2006, 08:15 PM
Soon that flame will rise into a towering inferno.
TheDeSade
11-25-2006, 09:49 PM
Val, some say the best imagery is that which requires the reader to supply most of the details. THis little snippet is imaginative and gives just enough that my old perverted brain kicked into high gear and just imagines what the next part is. . . and how it plays out! Well Done
Valkyrie402
11-26-2006, 04:04 PM
Thank you all for your responses.....and encouragement :)