Burning...

[Valkyrie402]

The ashes float away
on the breath of your whisper,
revealing a flicker of life
in the coals.....

A flame takes hold in
the wake of your fingers,
your lips blaze a trail
of fire on my skin.....

Heart and breath quicken
to the beat of your pulse,
burning alive
in your fiery gaze.....

The flames engulf me,
desire's inferno....
fuelled by your tongue
at the core of my being.....

Time halts,
split second,...eternity...
a million suns explode
from the darkness.....

The Dawn is more brilliant
than ever imagined.....
the Phoenix arisen
with the scream of Freedom.....




Thank you.....

[poetic_justice]

Beautiful imagery and very well written. I hope to hear more from you :)

[Talia]

Ohhh yes...Thank you! Very, very nice! I like how you close that out...Thank You.

Talia

[Valkyrie402]

Thank you Poetic Justice, thank you Talia! I'm grateful for the feedback and the kind words :)

[Timberwolf]

Lovely words, from a lovely Goddess.

[TheDeSade]

very well done. Beautiful.

[Valkyrie402]

Thank you both, gentlemen, for your kind words.

[slaveangel{HM}]

The Dawn is more brilliant
than ever imagined.....
the Phoenix arisen
with the scream of Freedom.....

Awesome! Such a powerful closing. Thankyou so much for sharing this with us.

angel xx

[Echoes]

so beautiful, thank you

[Valkyrie402]

Thank you both. It's nice that others seem to be enjoying my journey, too...:)