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TheDeSade
11-27-2006, 04:01 PM
for what it is worth
Endings
Points of no return
Life changing
Soul crumpling
Loss ridden
Tear stained
Emptiness
Void
To be filled
Expectant waiting
Ever looking
Always needing
Seeking
Finding
Sometimes unforeseen
Tentative touching
Joyous exploration
Delightful discovery
Beginnings
Valkyrie402
11-27-2006, 04:49 PM
I like this... I'm sure everyone can relate to it at some point in their lives, too - I know I can. Thank you!
Echoes
11-27-2006, 04:57 PM
for what it is worth
Endings
Points of no return
Life changing
Soul crumpling
Loss ridden
Tear stained
Emptiness
Void
To be filled
Expectant waiting
Ever looking
Always needing
Seeking
Finding
Sometimes unforeseen
Tentative touching
Joyous exploration
Delightful discovery
Beginnings
how do you mean for what it is worth TDS? These words sound contrasting to the poem you wrote in some way.
The words and meanings in this poem is what you speak, what you seek and part journey you traverse...to me that would be worth much.
The poem itself is beautiful, thank you for sharing this.
moptop
11-28-2006, 06:51 AM
I like the fact that it starts at the end and ends with the beginning. Sadness, seeking, hope. I really enjoy your writing TDS, and I'm sorry you're a bit - mad scientist - at the moment
TheDeSade
11-28-2006, 10:22 AM
rofl. . . . just the many voices trying to find an outlet. . . . . the AV is a temp thing. . . . changing soon