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elyse
11-28-2006, 10:59 AM
The Iron Poet Challenge over in Fun & Games takes three words and challenges the writer to create a poem incorporating them. I frequently ask friends for three words with which to work, and those words will dance madly in my mind until, at long last, they settle to the page. This poem was inspired by the idea of three words as a catalyst for something more... elyse

THREE WORDS

which three words
will transform us?

kneel before Me
spread your legs
bend over, girl ---
from Your lips
these thrill me

by Your command
yes, my Lord
may i cum ---
my private song
for You alone

I love you
are beautiful words
I need you
are powerful words
but the words
which transform us
open the door
open our eyes
those words are
you are Mine
and
i am Yours...

TheDeSade
11-28-2006, 11:23 AM
Interesting. I love the poem and images it evokes. I also like the idea of self imposed limitations on the format. Forces one to work harder to create the images and keep the flow. Well Done