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elyse
11-28-2006, 05:48 PM
DangerousSins offered the words: onomatopoeia, spank , puppy

SPANK
spank her
and listen
to those little whimpers
spank her
tangle fingers in that lustrous hair
pull that lovely head back
and gaze
into those puppy dog eyes
brimming with as-yet unshed tears
taste those tears
lifting them with Your fingertips
raising them to Your lips
sigh
with only the tiniest of regrets
but a burgeoning anticipation
of the onomatopoeia
of the slap
the smack
the crack
as Your hand meets supple flesh
again
and again
and again....

~~ elyse
TheDeSade
11-28-2006, 05:50 PM
wonderful... . . heheheheh . . . very ingenious way to integrate a hard word.
Sinful
11-28-2006, 05:52 PM
You are seriously gifted! You rock! I love it!
caligirl{Rob}
11-28-2006, 05:55 PM
Wow wow wow!
moptop
11-28-2006, 05:57 PM
That is great, elyse. You are really gifted. Loved it.
poetic_justice
11-28-2006, 06:22 PM
Fantastic :)
slaveangel{HM}
11-28-2006, 10:48 PM
Amazing.
Havensov
11-29-2006, 07:00 AM
Ok, now I'm in the mood.... now if only I could go home ;)
Echoes
12-01-2006, 05:36 AM
elyse, your writing, your poetry always leave me shaking my head, so gentile, expressive, expansive, your intelligence and knowledge is evident and so creative...showing the beauty of you. Thank you
Guest 91108
12-01-2006, 06:45 AM
oh my.. how did i miss this one.
Sighs.... very nice......
I think i see a book of erotica coming.
Timberwolf
12-01-2006, 04:02 PM
As always, you write with such class. And to wiggle out of that word, such skill as well. ;-)
Valkyrie402
12-02-2006, 08:35 PM
As always, beautiful imagery that leads my mind to explore further.... I can see her lips trembling as she fights to hold back the tears....

Wonderful!