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poetic_justice
11-28-2006, 06:25 PM
With strong hands at warm, bare back
Gently tracing fingers up to soft, dark hair
Gripped in a raging mass
Warm parted lips turned upto His.

Gasping softly against the hardness of His chest
Dark, deep eyes searching His own
As that familiar warmth courses deep
With a brushing of tongue across full lips.

A rose traced gently to creamy flesh
Soft breast cupped tenderly, as the
Thorn of such beauty pressed deep
At delicate sensual pain of the hearts embrace.

A hungered, needy kiss
More animalistic, intense, as her body trembles
And soft lips part to bathe His in kindly breath
Her back arching, pressing closer for His pleasure.

A gentle whisper "You would shed blood for Me,
Let me drink blood to my lips"
Warm crimson drops of slave love and desire
Burned to heated, needing flesh

Back arched softly, pressing
Hardened, delicate nipple to feeding lips
Warm, passioned gasp, escpaing her soul
Soft, muscled legs wrapping around His bronzed form.

Strong hands gripping her thighs
Raising that heavened sweetness between her legs
Higher for His pleasure,
Caressing her warmth with throbbing heat.

Dark lashes lowered to pale, freckled cheeks
Moaning quietly with the heavy weight of Him
Pushing deeper to her dark heaven
With long nails digging to His arms.

Warm lips kissing the soft skin above His heart
To make love, tenderly, violently
To rage together with love and pain and need
As the heated member thrusts deep to suffer the intensity.

Her small body pinned to the bed
Heavy muscled arm resting about her throat, holding her down
As she endures the passioned fucking
With hard gasps of pleasure meeting His ears.

Arms raising her hips
Pulling her deeper to meet the hard thrusts
Of demanding and fevered lovemaking
Feeling the ardent shared heat of their bodies.

Her eyes closing in pleasure as the erotic intimacy
Builds further between the pair
Daring each other to give and be more
The long, languised strokes.

Shivering hard with the brutal demanding of Him
Arching high, her shapely breasts pressed hard
To a fast beating heart
Screaming her release softly to His ear.

Her tongue stroking the roof of His mouth
As He rages harder to her young form
The mind reeling in a dreamlike erotic trance
Prolonging the sweet, sensual pleasure.

Holding each other close, bodies trembling
In a mass of limbs and lust
As they collapse together softly
A delicate, passionate kiss, with the melting of souls...

copyright © Tracey Cobb

frankee
11-30-2006, 10:26 PM
WOW! This is extremely erotic!!

Fantastic, pj. i always enjoy reading your poems:)

*grumbles something about a cold shower*

TheDeSade
11-30-2006, 10:30 PM
very very nice. Stong images, lots of very intense emotion wrapped up in this. This piece obviously was written from a pool of deep emotional attachment and intimate knowledge. GRINS. . .

slaveangel{HM}
11-30-2006, 11:23 PM
A very strong, erotic and powerful poem darling! *hugs you*

poetic_justice
12-01-2006, 02:41 AM
Thanks frankee, I always enjoy knowing that you liked them :)

TDS - You always manage to hit the proverbial nail on the head, and this praise coming from you Sir, is a grand thing indeed. Thankyou.

Sis - Your comments on my work always mean the world to me :) *hugs*

Echoes
12-01-2006, 05:33 AM
poetic_justice, I find myself having to come back time and time again to read your poems, not sure to say for they move me so much. They are so emotive, moving, enticing and extremely hot! *Agrees with angel on the cold shower*

poetic_justice
12-01-2006, 02:21 PM
Thankyou very much, Echoes :)

Timberwolf
12-01-2006, 04:00 PM
Fantastic job. I don't know what else to say besides "wow", becuse I rather enjoyed that. :rose:

poetic_justice
12-02-2006, 01:16 AM
Thankyou TW. Your praises - coming from such an amazing poet - always mean the world to me :)