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Uncertain_Curiosity
12-05-2006, 11:54 AM
Why can't you feel me?

Don't you feel my hand.

Clinging desparatly to yours.

See the tears that stream down my face?

Cried out of frustration.

Can't you hear my voice?

As I scream your name.

You can do this.

It takes one step.

One more step you can do it.

Just one more I promise this is the last one.

Just one more you can do it.

I've been there.

In the darkness.

With every step comes more light.

I can't show you the way.

Only you can do that.

I can only hold your hand.

And cheer every step you take.

Back to yourself.

Can't you feel me?

See my tears?

Can't you hear me screaming?

GET UP! one more step thats all.

one more step is the start.

and the end.

Just one more fucking step.

Can't you see I'm not alone?

How many hands have to reach out?

Before you take that first step.

Before you believe in you as much as we do.

How many voices have to scream out to you.

For you to hear us?

We're right here, right where you left us.

Stretch your hand out and grasp ours.

THATS the first step to finding the light.

MrDom
12-05-2006, 03:21 PM
Very nice Uncertain_Curiosity


MrDom

TheDeSade
12-05-2006, 04:43 PM
Very interesting. Now I wonder what was behind this. Is it a love uncertain, a person lost or something more sinister. I like anything that leaves my mind working when I finish it.

Uncertain_Curiosity
12-06-2006, 04:46 AM
Very interesting. Now I wonder what was behind this. Is it a love uncertain, a person lost or something more sinister. I like anything that leaves my mind working when I finish it.

In that case I won't tell.:26: