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elyse
12-12-2006, 09:09 AM
a grey landscape melts
slipping from substance to mist
i long to follow

Timberwolf
01-01-2007, 09:40 PM
Most intriguing.

TheDeSade
01-02-2007, 01:41 PM
reads, . . . . looks at you . . . reads again . . . . . . this evokes some disturbing images for me. . . . . are you ok?

elyse
01-02-2007, 09:14 PM
i am fine... though i probably wasn't when i wrote those haiku.