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usafmedic22
12-31-2006, 03:15 AM
flame kissed wicks light the room
virgin cord coiled upon fresh linen
apprehension mixed with anticipation
as her journey begins tonight
unable to still her trembling hands
piece by piece peels off her clothing
letting it fall to the floor
unbinding her flaxen locks
cascading it down her shoulders
pulse quickens as time draws near
she kneels in wait by the door
when silently He enters
footsteps circling around her
silken cloth quickly covers her eyes
taking her hand, He whispers
“Are you ready”
without a word she nods
“Then rise and come with me”

rora
12-31-2006, 08:10 AM
i love that! Thanks for sharing.

TheDeSade
12-31-2006, 12:03 PM
very very nice! . . . sometimes capturing just the thinnest slice of a special event evokes the most intense emotions and I think you have captured one here.

Guest 91108
12-31-2006, 10:29 PM
MM i got a nice visual of nervous anticipation.

Always delightful to see .. grins... Thanks for sharing..... , Medic.

Shadow
12-31-2006, 10:41 PM
wonderful.......smiles

Shadow

Timberwolf
01-01-2007, 11:25 AM
A most enjoyable piece... captures the moment so nicely.

elyse
01-01-2007, 10:13 PM
lovely, medic!

nowgirl
01-02-2007, 09:45 AM
this makes my heart ache....

Ozme52
01-02-2007, 07:20 PM
...personally poignant.

cariad
01-03-2007, 04:05 PM
That is beautiful, so evocative.

cariad