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poetic_justice
01-14-2007, 12:23 AM
"Hello, sweet slave..."
A soft, lingering kiss to her bare shoulder
The delicate skin,
Warmed with addictive taste to His lips.

Her satin lips brushing along the skin of His neck
Warm breath teasing His senses
As her tongue snakes along His ear;
The giving and taking of pain, an aphrodesiac on its own.

Warm, demanding fingertips, tracing the soft curve of her breast
As she termbles with the erotic onslaught
And presses closer, meeting His broad hand.
Pulling her close, kissing her tenderly as He claims her mouth again.

What she feels for Him,
An explosion to the soul, all engulfing;
His kind hands caressing the soft skin of her thighs
Adjusting her young body on His lap, feeling that heated throbbing between His legs.

Parting her bared thighs, exposing the warm mound of her dark heaven
Hardened flesh pressing to sweet, wet, scorching lips
A soft gasp of pleasure escaping her as
His hands move over her heavy, firm breasts.

Strong hands lowering to the generous curve of her hips
Feeling the throbbing heat of His body slip
To the dripping depths of her sweet need,
A quiet whimper from her lips, as He slides deeper...

His hungry mouth tasting hers, with
The consuming heat of their erotic passion
Her body pushed forward against His desk
Muscled hand gripping a tight mass of her soft hair.

Her dark, hungry eyes close, feeling the
Insatiable throbbing of His hunger, His need
Buried inside of her tight being
The steady pulse of His heartbeat so fulfilling.

Feeling the hot, wet, sensual pleasure of her body
A low cry erupts from her soul
Feeling, enduring, remembering
Her body tightening, in a futile attempt to seal part of Him inside of her.

Two bodies, aching to please and feel
Panting with hungered need,
The hard cool wood against her delicate breasts
His large body looming over her, holding her.

Her body trembling with the sensation
As He forces her to endure this intensity
While He plunges deep, moving her body with the strenth of Him
Coating His quivering hunger with her silken warm desire.

Her body pressing back to meet the brutal fucking nature
Trembling as she moans, His hand pressed to her back;
The feel of a silk tie linked gently around her neck
Cool against the heated, needful skin.

Each hard thrust of His hips, pressing her thighs close to the edge of the desk
Tears streak her tender face, feeling
The long, languished fucking
The tender strokes...

The soft metal of a stapler brushing lightly over her pale back
Jumping softly with the sensation
As he slows, feeling every gentle stroke of His hunger
Tracing letters along that precious skin, metal against her body.

P...A...I...N
A soft kiss to her back, her neck, her cheek
As she cries out, pressing hard to the desk
The sharp pain of the staple sinking deep to her skin, as she screams quietly in pain.

Drops of crimson blood against pale, glowing flesh
His soft lips placed over the wound
Fucking her hard, her body bucking gently with each thrust
As smoldered tears streak her pale angel's face.

The silken tie tightening hard around her throat
Her eyes widening gently, her nails digging to the desk
His sharp teeth pulling the staple from her back
Sucking drops of scarlet need to His lips.

That dark pleasure coursing through them both
As His warm breath trails over her delicate skin
Feeling His need swell inside of her
Crying out in pain, in tormenting release.

Struggling softly against the tie around her throat, feeling the digging pain
Trembling hard against the surface of His desk
The cool mahogany against her skin
While He explodes within her body.

Filling her so completely, the power within crests and breaks them both
The tie loosened softly, as she coughs, gasping
Surrendering to Him
As the kiss is tenderly broken.

Whispering soft words of comfort to her ears
Gently lifting her limp body from the desk,
Holding her close as he cradles her to His heart
Breasts rising and falling as she breathes, safe, loved, treasured.

copyright © Tracey Cobb

TheDeSade
01-14-2007, 12:28 AM
WOnderful! . . . . it is almost overpowering in its length and the number if images and emotions it invokes. This is one that demands it be re-read several times to really gather the whole of it. I found that I kept getting caught up in one image and having to stop and return to read again something that I missed.

poetic_justice
01-14-2007, 03:39 AM
Thankyou for the comment and the criticism TDS :)
That is largely what I was aiming for in this piece - a series of all consuming and powerful images that made you FEEL so deeply. I wanted it to be something powerful, and I think I accomplished that.

What particular images caught your attention?

TheDeSade
01-14-2007, 10:43 AM
Feeling the hot, wet, sensual pleasure of her body
A low cry erupts from her soul
Feeling, enduring, remembering
Her body tightening, in a futile attempt to seal part of Him inside of her.

I really like this one in particular. . . . . it seems to wrap up a whole all consuming total body and mind emotion

you should consider entering this one in the poetry contest.

poetic_justice
01-14-2007, 08:57 PM
LOL. Thats the second time you've mentioned it. Alright. Which one?

Warbaby1943
01-15-2007, 10:01 AM
pj great once more but again I sure wish sometime someone would get laid in your writings. You sure put the mind's eye to work with all you write.

poetic_justice
01-15-2007, 05:33 PM
pj great once more but again I sure wish sometime someone would get laid in your writings. You sure put the mind's eye to work with all you write.

You know someone got laid in that, cheeky bugger. :blurp_ani Thankyou Warbaby: as always, your comments are more than welcome.

Guest 91108
01-15-2007, 05:43 PM
pj, I really like this writing. so much visualization.... moans and wanders off.

poetic_justice
01-16-2007, 04:08 AM
Thankyou Wolf... very much.

Warbaby1943
01-16-2007, 09:11 AM
You know someone got laid in that, cheeky bugger. :blurp_ani Thankyou Warbaby: as always, your comments are more than welcome.

LMAO but you are so welcome and so talented.

orchidsoul
01-17-2007, 06:29 AM
This poem is mmmmmmmmm!

Your descriptions and storytelling abilities are extremely titilating :)

poetic_justice
01-18-2007, 02:45 AM
Thankyou very much orchidsoul :)