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Timberwolf
02-03-2007, 03:00 PM
Hollow

Waves crash against rocks
Wind slides around trees
Raindrops fall into a lake
Snow glistens in the sun
A green field stretches to the horizon

People dance
A couple flirts
Drinks shared with friends
Someone lights a cigarette
Everything feels so hollow

A night at the symphony
The radio plays in a taxi
Someone sings along with Stairway to Heaven
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow

A man prays in church
Somewhere a prostitute fingers her rosary
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow

Two people fall in love
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow

Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow
Everything feels so hollow

TheDeSade
02-03-2007, 03:56 PM
Haunting! Lot of pain and frustration wound up in this piece. Thank you for sharing.

SheepishJaina
02-03-2007, 04:39 PM
Wonderful piece hon. I'm so glad you've shared it. *hugs tightly*

Timberwolf
02-03-2007, 08:14 PM
Thanks TDS and sheepish for your support.

moptop
02-05-2007, 02:57 AM
Oh, TW, I feel this for you. Sending you hugs.

Timberwolf
02-05-2007, 12:44 PM
Thanks moptop.

tessa
02-05-2007, 01:23 PM
An existence spelled out in lonely words. Very moving.

Timberwolf
02-05-2007, 01:36 PM
Thank you tessa.

MsUther
02-18-2007, 03:59 PM
Once again I find that you are speaking my mind and soul.
Thanks for sharing this, Timberwolf.
XxxX