March Poetry Contest Now Open - Post Entries Here

[TheDeSade]

Well! Here we are at the beginning of the third in our poetry contests. This month we are going to do something a little different. This month instead of a topic, you are given the title to a poem. The requrement is that you create an acrostic poem using this title.

The title for this months poem will be Take Me Please. You may write from the point of view of a submissive asking or begging to be taken or the point of view of a dominant listening to a submissive pleading.

For those of you that are unfamiliar with this type of poetry here is a bit of help. To create an acrostic poem, each line of your poem must begin with the next successive letter in the title of the poem. In this case, the first line of your poem must begin with T, the next line must begin with A, etc. Your poem will be 12 lines long.

Good Luck and Good Writing!

TDS

[TheDeSade]

OK . . . . Its time!. . . . Post your March entry to the poetry contest here.

We have some had some great participating in the past two months.

TDS

[LikelySuspect]

Touch me. Feel me tremble beneath your fingertips
Allow me to kneel before you
Kiss me. Make the pain melt away
Empty the burdens from my mind

Make me feel alive. Let me please you
Erase the loneliness inside of me

Punish me. I’ve done wrong so many times
Let me make it up to you
Envelope me in your arms. Make me whole
Assist me in becoming who you want me to be
Satisfy the need that lays dormant inside
Enjoy me. Please

[Dragon's muse]

Take Me Please

Tenderness falls by the wayside. Flesh
Aching for Your touch, Your
Kisses, the
Ecstasy that only comes in Your arms.

Make me Yours, oh beloved Master.
Educate me in how to please You.

Pleasure is Yours to rip from my body. In
Loving submission i prostrate myself for Your
Eyes to behold.
Always longing for
Sweet surrender in Your
Embrace.

[Eponine]

Torn between desire and obedience not to touch,
her fingers remained still at her sides.
Agonizing spasms of lust went through her body in a rush,
the waves of need coming at her in tides.
Knowing the permitted release would be bliss when it came
made the waiting bearable and kept her sane.
Endless orgasm over orgasm would pound her as she called out his name:
"Master," she would say to this man who had invaded her brain.

Making her wait was the purpose and ploy he had in mind,
planned by him to break and remake her.
Enveloping her in his torture, there was no need to bind-
his mind poised over hers, it was easy to take her.

Perilously close she perched on the precipice of endurance and wear,
she now opened her mouth to shamelessly plead and moan.
Languishing in mind-numbing desperation, she struggled but did not dare
to caress or to pleasure that which she did not own.
Ever aware of the hunger in her eyes and the anguish in her cries,
he guided her even deeper into the spiral of need.
Avidly watching her body to maintain control of its every fall and rise,
he relished the torment she suffered under his lead.
Soaring into subspace, her spirit transcended through the pain of yearning,
she welcomed his fingers continuing to play and tease.
Endlessly his, she finally spoke the words that would end this burning-
her lips parted now to let her say, "Master, take me please."

[tessa]

I don't have a poem, just wanted to say how wonderful all the entries are so far!

tessa :wave:

[Echoes]

I don't have a poem, just wanted to say how wonderful all the entries are so far!

tessa :wave:

hrmmm, where is your poem tessa??? ;p

Take me please.

Time has pondered slow with distant
absence, yet still we wait for each other.
karma, kinetics, creation tumbled together,
evolutionary meeting then sudden deportation,

missing you, the pain has sluggishly softened
entirely to a simple dream yet never simple, nor single.

Passing mist soothes, tears upon parched skin,
leant trees bound by strong wind
ebbing to gentle breeze with subtle tug of hair.
an aching reminder you are here
shadowing my mind. Swallowing frustrated scream
evermore, how much longer must we wait?

[Eponine]

I don't have a poem, just wanted to say how wonderful all the entries are so far!

tessa :wave:

Thanks!

I hope we get many more entries!

[Radiance]

This Girl

your poem was wicked,purrssssssssssssssssssssss

[Eponine]

Thank you :) i'm glad you appreciated it :)

[Eponine]

beautiful, tessa and firefly.

[tessa]

beautiful, tessa and firefly.

For my part, I say thank you. I drooled a bit over yours, so sorry about that. It was just too luscious. :)

[Rhabbi]

Take Me Please

Talking to you
Anticipating our future
Knowing the love
Enjoying the banter

My desire
Equips me

Planning the seduction
Longing to feel
Enticing you with
Anticipation and conversation
Supplying you with
Everything I have

[Widget]

“Take me please”, you said
“Away with you,
Kill me with anticipation,
Entice me with to
Move beyond and
Envelope me whole.
Promise me that I will be
Loved and
Entirely yours”
And
So
Explicitly she did.

[Ronn]

Tessa your poem much like you was quite beautiful and a joy to read. Another talent you have that i didnt know about you should be quite proud sweetie.

[tessa]

Tessa your poem much like you was quite beautiful and a joy to read. Another talent you have that i didnt know about. you should be quite proud sweetie.

~sweet hugs for ronn~

You are just a darling to me. Thank you so much for your words!

[TheDeSade]

Voting for the March poetry contest is now open. Due to a problem with the operator of this contest (me), the voting has been extended one extra week.

If you had already voted in the previous poll, please re-vote!


thanks


TDS

[Eponine]

I just have a question... why do so few people vote???... it's like the stories.. .so many readers, so few reviews....