life

[Valkyrie402]

This black hole
called life
drags us
inexorably forward
to the welcome release
called death...

Why does it have to take so long...?

[tessa]

Tragic hope expressed in poetry. Thank you for sharing.

[Valkyrie402]

Thanks, tessa. I felt pretty miserable when I wrote it, a bit less so now, though...

[poetic_justice]

I am glad you have been able to move forward, away (even if only a few inches) from the extent of this pain. Thankyou for sharing the hope of release, of peace with us, Valkyrie

[Valkyrie402]

Thank you for your kind words poetic justice.... they are appreciated.

[ashsoul]

I think what you say its true, your poem is of great inspiration....few people read Nietzsche nowadays...