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Dragon's muse
05-01-2007, 05:08 AM
A leap into the unknown
*
Trusting to the universe
Trusting what the heart
Tells you
To be right
*
Irrevocably right
Inevitably resonant
In the darkest corners of my soul
*
“Let there be light. . . “
Where was naught but darkness before?
*
Let there be pleasure
Where
Nothing but pain dwelt
*
Let there be joy
Where numbness and misery held sway
*
Let there be a warm heart full to bursting
Where a cold, shriveled, shivering, empty thing once resided
*
Let there be love
Where the loathing has been
Where the fear has been
Where the self-pity has been
*
Sweet Goddess of All
Let there be Love.

jeanne
05-01-2007, 05:36 AM
I like the rhythm of this.

Rhabbi
05-01-2007, 08:33 AM
Another lovely poem. I like this one the best. It shows that trust is an active thing, something you do, not something that you get.

Dragon's muse
05-02-2007, 09:05 AM
his 1,

Thank you. This was one of the ones that just flowed without a great deal of thought. Usually the best i have found.

Rhabbi,
We have always considered that trust is a choice that we make every day.

i am very glad you both liked the poem.