It's gonna sting, enjoy

[Darkmagi]

Its taken me now to tie knots an hour
Chained you to the table fixed into position
Made you get naked giving me superior power
Mouth is gagged saliva dripping from your restrained lips
With mind focused on prey that I'm about to devour

So I raise my hand to strike naked cheek
With pulses through nerves and tear brought to eye
Slapping again on buttock bringing pain that you seek
Palm coming down hitting your posterior exposed
Though your lips are trapped, I still hear you squeak

[Darkmagi]

This one is a work in progress, not sure where to go with it. Your comments please!!

[pulpo]

Ilike it. How about describing the helplessness and slight fear felt by the bottom

[gladgirl]

I like it so far.

[jeanne]

I like it.


Ilike it. How about describing the helplessness and slight fear felt by the bottom

Or, the mental/emotional state of the Dom? As a submissive, I'm intensely curious about what goes through your minds when you have us at your mercy...