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poetic_justice
03-07-2007, 08:02 PM
Take Me Please

Torturous sensations of stinging flesh, red and marked and overstretched.
A little blood to mark His bed, thoughts of love filled with dread.
Keeping with the sadistic themes, of His own loving memories.
Erotic love and painful marks, singing like the ancient dove.

Mercilessly He strikes, listening to wanton cries.
Escape it futile, it never ends, no excuses, the rules don't bend.

Powerful breath lay in the dark, mercinary of her heart.
Labyrinth of both their needs, her with the lock, Him with the key.
Erupting from within their beings, for the first time together, truly seeing.
As He holds her close and weeps, her arms around Him, the key He keeps.
Sensual heaven then both did feel, while with Him she'll always heel.
Extremes they know, and yet they need. Together at last, they'll always be.

^firefly^
03-15-2007, 01:54 PM
Take Me, Please

Time without you hurts
Another day passes; I only want you more
Keep waiting for just a glimpse, a word
Everything hangs on seeing you again

Maybe you’ll give me time today
Even now is one more chance to show you

Perhaps today you’ll see what I’m offering
Longing for you to take, to own, to possess
Every part of me is yours
And you don’t even know it yet
So I will prove myself patient, until you see
Every day I’m begging for you

tessa
03-15-2007, 09:15 PM
hrmmm, where is your poem tessa??? ;p

Your question rushed words up from the depths. So, Echoes, quite surprisingly (for me anyway) here it is. :o


Take Me Please

Tortured, awaiting that which proves so elusive
Agony in every passing moment unrealized
Knowing the intimate perfection to be attained
Ever wanting.

Must I rove alone through this maze of hope unfulfilled?
Enslaved to a desire audaciously enigmatic?

Passion in the realm of suspended fate
Lost time like beautiful dreams transformed into nightmares
Echoes of possibilities woven through the despair covering me
Apart from what sustains my soul
Secluded in this place far removed
Ever waiting.