I'll be glad to proofread for you
I'll be glad to proofread for you. As a fellow writer, though mostly not of BDSM themed scripts, I know how hard it is to get it all right the first time, or even the second or third time. And I know how irritating it is to have problems reading something when the spelling and grammar's all screwy.
I'll be glad to take a look at it for you. I'm a writer too, though mostly of fanfic. I am working on my second full-length novel, but I still have time on my hands (I don't work) so I can look into it for you. If you're interested, drop me an email at baemaminski@msn.com. Hope to hear from you soon!