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Ed,
I don;t want to be a critic, but I think you got the rhyme scheme wrong.
It should be,
. . . . .
I always get that wrong too, so don't feel bad. Hehehehehehe
but seriously I was sorry I couldn't see the poem.
Have a great day.
John
*LAUGHS*
Nice one, John!!!
You're both wrong! *shaking my head.
The correct rhyme scheme is as follows
* * * * * ***
* * * * * ***
* * * * *
* * * * *
* * ** * ** * **
Enough said.
*shakes head*
* * * * ****
* * * *****
* * ** ** * *****
* ** * ** * *
I should know-it's my poem!
Silly is the word for this, the rhyme scheme and rythm both need work too.
Hmph! Well, I stand corrected. Truly it is your "silly" poem; nevertheless the rythm is highly questionable. However, I commend you on it's superlative silliness.