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Something I threw together after looking at iron poet. thrall encouraged me to post it here. Please be kind.
A cascade of emotion
A torrent of desire
Bringing life to desolation
And a raging fire
Does life have to be pain
Can it not be always joy
A summer storm of rain
And some time with a toy
Knowing you brings rivers
And the maelstrom of whitewater
My life is full of shivers
And pleasure ever after
See, I knew that you had it in you after all.........lol
Its beautiful........
Wow, that's very good. I love the imagery.
Thank you thrall, that means a lot.Quote:
Originally Posted by thrall
Nice of you to say so twitch. Thank you.Quote:
Originally Posted by twitch
WoW Rhabbi awesome poem...
Twitch was right i love the imagery as well
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snow
Thank you snow, nice to know I can write poems also.Quote:
Originally Posted by snowflake
you can indeed write poems mate!