The Day I Die

Very short poem... I don't even think it classifies. This is a bit of a re-write of an older poem I wrote that just popped into my head while I was getting ready for work. Criticize at your leisure as usual.

Behind a mask is where I'll stay
I'll never tell them that I'm not okay
I'll sit here quietly until that day
The day I'll die, and fade away

HUn you will never fade away.. No matter how hard you try.. There will always be a few of us that will never let go...

huggles
snowflake

you brought tears to my eyes. *hugs* sweetie