The Orgainizational Series by Slave Ruthie

I am hoping to see some conversation about and for Slave Ruthie.

Her Organizational Series is an excellent example of a writer evolving into an excellent writer.

The first series, the House of Ali was interesting and stimulating enough to bring me back to her next attempt in the series.

The Second chance has literally captivated me, an incredible relationship has developed in my heart with the prime characters, Alexa and her Master Charles, and Guljana and her Senate Master.

No other story on this site has ever held me on the edge of my seat, while simultaneously stimulating the libido, and the sadistic interest in pain.

thanks everyone

veru skjava

hmmm no comments?

*pouts* in disappointment

After emailing Ruthie about how much I enjoy her story, I was lucky enough to start chatting with her.

I told her how wonderful these boards can be, and posted the above discussion suggestion.

Is there noone with any comments?

please lets see what we can do :confused:

I love this story so far. It really has 'mood', although it is quite intense.

Maybe the lack of response due to the story being already too long for people to jump into. I'm still not up to date yet.

Makes me wonder whether people read more than a fraction of what they download! I think with so many stories coming onto the site all the time, the longer ones are the least likely to be read, whether high quality or not.

I hope to say more about The Organization when I'm up to date.

Smiles...

Thanks Moggy,

I have read lots of long stories, some became boring, others, created almost a friendship with different characters.

That's exactly what happened with Alexa and Guli in this series. I immediately identified with her emotionally.

Ruthie's ability to describe the depth of her submission first to Master Stephen, then to Master Charles touched me.

Also the characterization of Master Charles, his deliberate and conscious methods in dealing with slaves serves to give him depth I seldom see in a character.

When I read a story just for the "heat" of it, the characterizations are important. Yet with this novella, and a few others I am enjoying, the ability to care about, and feel for the characters intensifies the enjoyment.

Now, I hope for length, so that said relationships aren't ended with the feeling of, "Hey, wait a minute, what happened when..."

Thank you for commenting, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, *wink* maybe if you also have feelings about the two main slaves, Ruthies muse will unfold it (trying not to give away further chapters you have not read), with a happy ending.

As it stands now, reading this story is like watching a mini series, her ability to hang the reader on the suspense hook is excellent.

:) veru skjava

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As it stands now, reading this story is like watching a mini series, her ability to hang the reader on the suspense hook is excellent.

:) veru skjava

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I've not yet had a chance to read all of the chapters of slave Ruthies' Organization Series but the ones that I have read have left me wanting to know what happened next. I'd like to compliment Ruthie on her writing abilities. Her stories are well written and I agree with veru skjava that the suspense hook is excellent. :)

Hello everyone, I have been cruising through my book shelf and review list.

I have to say Artemis and Moggy you have both seen what I have. As one that proofreads for several authors here at the library I am lucky to know that upcoming chapters of this story are going to be fantastic.

I agree that some of the longer stories do not tend to get read, *sighs* such a shame, as this is proving to be a capable of publication.

Ruthies insight into the slaves heart and ability to give the readers a glimpse of the interior workings of the Masters is very deep. Her ability to combine the emotional with the physical is excellent.

I am reviving this thread in hopes of some more feedback.

Merry Christmas everyone:)

veru skjava

We very much like veru skjava's eagerness to discuss these interwoven stories and wish her and her literary friends the best of BDSM luck.

We, however, don't really get roused by stories involving sadistic men. Sadistic women, oh yes, but cruel men? Too close to reality, perhaps?

I felt like communicating this, and, again, do hope the discussion and analyses continue.

Erika & Heinz

I just wanted to bring this thread back to life.

The 2nd Chance of The Organizational Series has caught the eye of a reputable publisher!!!!

YEEEEEEEEEEE HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

So if you have not had the inclination to read at least 2nd Chance before, I hope you will find it to do so now.

That is about all I am willing to say on the matter right now without permission from the author, who became a VERY dear friend and sister slave as a result of my writing to praise her writing.

I am extremely impressed with ruthies writing skills, and now have had that confirmed by a highly recognized magazine.

*hope that wet the appitites*

veru skjava:D

ppl have no idea how valuable their comments are - both the positive AND the negative! i hope i am improving and learning as i go on...and i sincerely hope ppl will continue to tell me if i am 'on' or 'off' the mark ;)

thank you all very much, specially theresa :)

love

ruthie[Phil]

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I love Ruthies work, it was one of my main reasons for finding this site actually. I noticed her storys on Gary Roberts site, darkstarprods.com, and got to reading her work and was really drawn into it, I love her writing style and the depth she goes into about the lives of slaves etc.

The first one I read of hers was The house of Ali, and I love the way she's tied (;)) the characters from that series into the current one, as alexa's cousins.

The one thing that I dont like about Ruthies storys is having to wait for more to come, Im constantly checking the updates for more of her story :)

Keep them coming Ruthie :D

Edit: Ruthie, whos that picture meant to be of, Alexa?

wow! vikki you are really kind - thank you for your encouragement :)

sorry also for the slowness of the updates - i've been abit poorly but am getting back to things now. there's the next chapter of Harvest of Tears to finish, a barely started project with theresa-sis and i gave in to persuasion from soem ppl and started writing a prequel to 2nd Chance which will be the story of how Alexa became a slave...

the drawing is by Boris Vallejo and you can get it at http://www.aumania.it/fa/vallejo/223.jpg
- i guess it COULD be Alexa, couldn't it??? ;)
and it was sent to U/us by a lovely couple in Canada who spotted it on the cover of an album by Bran Van 3000 called "discosis"

pleeeese keep in touch, specially to let me know how i'm doing because all budding authors here need to hear from their readers (the good AND the bad comments)!

hugggggggggggggggs to a fellow Scottish slave

ruthie[Phil]

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i gave in to persuasion from soem ppl and started writing a prequel to 2nd Chance which will be the story of how Alexa became a slave...

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That'll be quite cool :)

I was wondering if you were going to do it, didnt want to ask incase, just incase.

xxx ;)

umm, i have doen the first part of the prequel, called "encounter with destiny" but its not been proofed yet - do you want a sneak preview (or anyone else)?

huggggggggggs

ruthie[Phil]

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Sure :eek:

its not been proofed yet!

Ill try and help proof it :)

Edit: wow :D

I couldnt see anything wrong with it at all and now I know roughly what age Alexa would be now, very good job, keep them coming :)

i'll post up this first part then - still working on the next section, then maybe i can get my head round the follow-up of "harvest of tears" - i got really stuck trying to work out the plotline because there's loads of threads to bring together (sigh) and because this is the last story focussing on little alexa...

thanks again for your encouragement

hugggggggggggs

ruthie[Phil]

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Sorry, no comment on your writing, but that is a truly beautiful Avatar! Maybe the best I've seen.

hi Curtis :)

the drawing is taken from one of Boris Vallejo's and its at http://www.aumania.it/fa/vallejo/223.jpg

love

ruthie[Phil]

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Beautiful. Thank you.

just sent ch 6 to Jinn for posting - hope its okies :)

love & respect

ruthie[Phil]

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i've just sent Jinn ch3 of Encounter With Destiny, sorry for taking so long with this one

love & respect

ruthie[Phil]

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i had to revise 2nd Chance completely to iron out the differences with the story that coems before it (Encounter With Destiny) and to allow for the concluding story in the Alexa trilogy (Harvest of Tears). i tried to find all the bits that didn't connect and correct soem of the rotten grammar and punctuation - i'm sure there's more and thanx to all the ppl who tell me, i hope i'm getting better (sheesh, why oh why didn't i get help like this when i was trying to learn English at school??? if only the teacher had encouraged creative bdsm writing!!!)

i hope 2nd Chance reads better now and i thank Jinn Sir VERY VERY much for kindly allowing me to post the revised chapters :)

love & respect

ruthie
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Mmm, that's a lovely picture you included, Ruthie! :D
LD

...i saw it and immediately thought of You, my Lord Douche Sir ;)

(and i shall clean the Library Room next time btw but pleeeese stop hiding the chocolate wrappers under the cushions!)

love and err respect

ruthie
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Im I mixing up the 2 storys the orgainizational series and the thantros sociaty. I know one of them started real well then it started down a dirt road with lots of scat and bugs.
Totaly turned me off and i stopped reading them :eek:

errr scat and bugs (ewwwwwww) aren't exactly my kind of thing (blech!)

love and respect

ruthie
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Im I mixing up the 2 storys the orgainizational series and the thantros sociaty. I know one of them started real well then it started down a dirt road with lots of scat and bugs.
Totaly turned me off and i stopped reading them :eek:

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It was Thanatos. I still read those stories, the beginning for orgasms, the latter parts for the gross-out factor. I'm a witch, I believe in communing with nature, but I think that's a little closer than I would like to get! The Organization series is one of the better written series of stories; the writing is technically apt with a few negligible errors; the plot's engaging, and I read it not only for the scenes but also because I want to know what happens to poor Alexa. I can't wait for more updates!

sorry for the lengthy delay between chapters of Encounter With Destiny - i'll try to be quicker with the next bit, honest!

love & respect

ruthie
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Originally Posted by slave ruthie

sorry for the lengthy delay between chapters of Encounter With Destiny - i'll try to be quicker with the next bit, honest!

love & respect

ruthie
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Dear lady,
I hadn't noticed this thread until today, or you would've heard from me sooner.
The stories you craft are some of the finest erotic fiction I've read. Carefully thought through, full of developed characters and fine plot lines.
You are certainly welcome to take your time writing each story; the enjoyment your readers will experience is worth the wait.
Thank you for much pleasure!