Storys that I would like to see continued

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08-04-2004
Mobius

Storys that I would like to see continued

and have more chapters.

There are a few storys that I have come to like. Some are still active and on going as of now. And some have not been updated in over a year.

Cookoo is very good and it is an active story so no worrys there.

Allie and nicole. The story of a 16 year old that is enslaved by her aunt after the tragic loss of her perents. This has not been updated for quite some time. If is one of the best storys on this site and I hope to see new chapters in the future.

Cowgirl. This is a fantastic story that was posted I think from another site. I think it was posted originaly on the RPP site (Rape Pillage and Plunder web site) I do not know the auther but If he/she is out there Please continue on. It was left in a cliff hanger part and would like to see if it can be continued.

Skirt Day I realy like this implousible story of a lady that by her own decision does any thing that any one tells her to do when she wears a skirt.

Mothers submision. Great story please continue this one. A mother being made to pimp out her daughters to a beastly man. I love this story. Please please more chapters. Moby like. :)

Of course there are the usual suspects of storys that I have gotten used to reading for so long and then they are finished.

Taking Carol
Tracy in Truble
Amason dot cum
there are others of course

And now for some infamus storys that only in my opinion should be put to sleep (only in my opinion seeing that they are so long that they are impossible to catch up on.

Slave Girls in bondage. 71 chapters arge
Raise of lue chang It is not fair I have never read this story. but now it is to late.
First female president Sorry I will never read a story that has any thing to do with sm and religen. I will read a story with SM or any other kink but when you put religen into it you will scare moby away.

My cudoose to all authers please keep up the good work

Moby
08-04-2004
Gallardo

I would appreciate a continuation of Tara's Adventures ;)
08-04-2004
redEva

everything that Ninja Turtle wrote could be continued and extended! PLEASE more turtles!
08-05-2004
Garmonbozia

I'd love to see some more of Cowgirl too. I contacted the author to offer my services in a proofreading aspect but I have not heard anything back. Maybe they are no longer around :(

I'd also love to see more of The Interns

As a budding new author I do know how hard it can be sometimes when life intrudes on your yearn to write. So hopefully most of the authors who have been a little absent for a while are simply busy and are dying to make a comeback soon.

Jason
08-06-2004
Mobius

I am very sorry not to have mentioned "The Interns" also
fine piece of work although the whole interracial thing is a bit of a turn off. But if you look past that it is a good story about older dominent women enslaving much yunger upity girls. Got to love that.

Also I totaly missed this one and that was "house wifes awakining'. Another great story that I am very happy to see is continueing.

There are so many great storys that only have one or 2 chapters. If i could get my search engine working I would list them for you. But alass seeing that only one person gave me a tip. I do not have a search engine.

My greatest respect and thank you goes out to all authors
Even the ones that write things that I do not like.
(wont mention what that is. I would get flamed ) :)
08-06-2004
"Roof"

"Workout Girls" story is good

Am looking forward to 'Workout Girls' being continued. Maledom stories appeal to me, and surely to many others. Every guy has a curvy-yet-snobbish/prim wench in their lives that (in the perfect world of fiction anyway)need to be "re-educated" in a bondage dungeon situation. I'd like the girls put through their intense s/m training, "no pain--no gain" in the quest to form the ideal prick-service painslut.
08-08-2004
DocilePet

Clarification on "The Interns"

:) First and foremost, thanks Mobius for the "plug" on "The Interns." I just wanted to make it as clear as possible that the "interracial" aspects of this story is not, will not, and never will be intended to be prejudicial toward any race or gender. The story is based on the life experience's of a 'lifestyle' wonderful, highly educated African American Mistress that has been an acquaintance of the author for over 20 years. Of course, the story is "embellished," with "fantasy," however, many aspects of the story are the "modus operandi" of this great lady, especially the "mind control" portions. She still has two very pretty white submissive women living with her for a very long time. The names have been changed and some characters are added on the whim of the author. There is something about the experience of black on white, or vice versa mystique, in a sexual or dominant/submissive relationship that adds that "certain something" to the situation for some people. I just wanted to be sure that readers of "The Interns" understand that the intentions of this author was never to be prejudicial toward anyone. Again, thanks for mentioning "The Interns" in your post!
08-08-2004
Mobius

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Originally Posted by DocilePet

:) First and foremost, thanks Mobius for the "plug" on "The Interns." I just wanted to make it as clear as possible that the "interracial" aspects of this story is not, will not, and never will be intended to be prejudicial toward any race or gender. The story is based on the life experience's of a 'lifestyle' wonderful, highly educated African American Mistress that has been an acquaintance of the author for over 20 years. Of course, the story is "embellished," with "fantasy," however, many aspects of the story are the "modus operandi" of this great lady, especially the "mind control" portions. She still has two very pretty white submissive women living with her for a very long time. The names have been changed and some characters are added on the whim of the author. There is something about the experience of black on white, or vice versa mystique, in a sexual or dominant/submissive relationship that adds that "certain something" to the situation for some people. I just wanted to be sure that readers of "The Interns" understand that the intentions of this author was never to be prejudicial toward anyone. Again, thanks for mentioning "The Interns" in your post!

I hope you were not offended by my comments. I just find the whole race thing in my erotic litature, a turn off. Other than something erotic. Kind of like kissing your grandmother.
I like the story becouse an erotic older woman is dominating and possesing a younger woman. Race should not be an issue. To me it is errelivent to the content. I would like to see the story continue with maby some body mods to help in her submission. Keep up the good work.
08-08-2004
boccaccio2000g

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Originally Posted by Mobius

and have more chapters.

And now for some infamus storys that only in my opinion should be put to sleep (only in my opinion seeing that they are so long that they are impossible to catch up on.

Raise of lue chang It is not fair I have never read this story. but now it is to late.

My cudoose to all authers please keep up the good work

Moby

Thanks for the cudoose, Moby.

But I'm chagrined by the fact that you regard "The Rise of Li Chang" {Jade Pavilion Book II} as infamous :-(( There are many, many chapters -- Chapter 116 "Leather, Blood, and Iron" is but one example -- that one can pick up and read without having read any of the prior chapters. All you need to know is that the baron is a nasty fellow, and that the story proper is set in the 1880's and that the baron is reminiscing about events that happened in his teenage years, twenty-five years earlier -- but one can pretty well discern all that from the context, I think.

There *is* a unified story line that connects all of the many episodes, but I honestly believe that a reader could select a chapter title that appeals to him/her like

"The Training of Erika Weiss"
"On Shameful Display"
"Warm Breasts and Hot Oil -- The Valley of Pleasure"
"Feng the Butcher and the Barbarian Princess"
"The Breast Bondage of the Ceylonese Sisters"
"The Nipple-Gag of Genghis Khan"
"Mila the Slave Dancer"
"The Dungeon of Fear"
"The Humiliation of Ming-tsu"
"The Degradation of Erika Weiss"

just to name a few -- read it, and enjoy it from an erotic perspective, without much regard for the overall story. Hopefully, the reader's interest would be piqued enough to read more of the adventures of the many beautiful heroines and treacherous villains who populate this story, but if not, that's OK.

Pick out a chapter title that appeals to you and give it a shot. I don't think you'll be disappointed. #116 is a particular favorite of mine, but what do I know. :-)

Boccaccio
08-08-2004
Mobius

Thanks for the input I will take in under advisement. I was not picking on the rise of lil chang persay. It is just a little hard to start a book in the middle or the end and understand it. I would even think it hard to follow taking carol if I started in the middle. But fortunatly I started from the begining. When I am flush wth paper and toner I will print out a few chapters and read with delite.
08-08-2004
boccaccio2000g

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Originally Posted by Mobius

When I am flush wth paper and toner I will print out a few chapters and read with delite.

Hmmm, I'd rather you didn't mention 'flush', 'paper', and my stories in the same sentence. ;-)

Seriously, the possibility that people print out my stories almost never enters my mind. Hmmm, I could see how my zillion-chapter opus could be a little off-putting -- and a bit pricey -- in that case. I always just read the stories on the screen. I've never so much as printed one of my own stories.

How about the rest of you folks -- do you print out the stories or read them from the screen?

If the former, can you recommend a company that specializes in printer paper, so that I can add it to my investment portfolio?

Let's see, if there are a 100 million perverts in the world, each reading five stories a week, time ten pages a story... Gees, I'll be a millionaire by this time next week! :-)

Boccaccio
08-08-2004
Mobius

Quote:

Originally Posted by boccaccio2000g

Hmmm, I'd rather you didn't mention 'flush', 'paper', and my stories in the same sentence. ;-)

Seriously, the possibility that people print out my stories almost never enters my mind. Hmmm, I could see how my zillion-chapter opus could be a little off-putting -- and a bit pricey -- in that case. I always just read the stories on the screen. I've never so much as printed one of my own stories.

How about the rest of you folks -- do you print out the stories or read them from the screen?

If the former, can you recommend a company that specializes in printer paper, so that I can add it to my investment portfolio?

Let's see, if there are a 100 million perverts in the world, each reading five stories a week, time ten pages a story... Gees, I'll be a millionaire by this time next week! :-)

Boccaccio

actualy it is closer to 8 storys an update all printed out in a highly edited format 2 colums in about 80 pages.
Sorry it is easyer to read that way.

I just cant not get my self to read a story on a computer terminal.
I like Paper and so do my cats. they love to sleep on the pile o smut.
08-08-2004
Gallardo

It was fascinating the first time I learned some people read the stories offline on paper. Personally, I always read it at the computer. Ink IS VERY expensive. So you probably want to add Dell or HP to your portfolio years ago when they were still profitable making ink.
08-08-2004
Mobius

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Originally Posted by Gallardo

It was fascinating the first time I learned some people read the stories offline on paper. Personally, I always read it at the computer. Ink IS VERY expensive. So you probably want to add Dell or HP to your portfolio years ago when they were still profitable making ink.

Well being the cheap old bastard that I am. I use an old reliable HP laserjet 6lsi that inhales a toner cartrage about once in a coons age. or about once every 5-6 reams of paper. You have to set the printer up right with the printer propterys 150dpi eco mode about 9 point type times roman. It is small but it is readable. The last Toner cartrage i bought was back in last september. It recently ran out so I am using a very nice HP7760 inkjet printer and even when set to draft mode 150 dpi it inhales black ink about a #55 black cartrage for ever ream of paper.
Realy suck at about $17 dollars a cartrage. Oh and there are no refill kits. HP injet monoply bastards.

you just cannot read and enjoy a story with out it printed out. The only other way I would like to do it would be with a palm or a handheld organizer like a windows ce with a nice collor screen but then i would be bitching about the high cost of batteries.
08-08-2004
redEva

Quote:

Originally Posted by boccaccio2000g

...Seriously, the possibility that people print out my stories almost never enters my mind. Hmmm, I could see how my zillion-chapter opus could be a little off-putting -- and a bit pricey -- in that case. I always just read the stories on the screen. I've never so much as printed one of my own stories.

How about the rest of you folks -- do you print out the stories or read them from the screen?...
Boccaccio

I prefer to read on paper. Reading of screen is tiring for my eyes and I cannot get as comfortable as with paper. If I’m proofreading – I do that on the puter cause it is easier to add comments and correct right there. Now, that certainly does not mean that I print every story that I choose to read, but if the story looks promising and is longer than 5-6 pages, I will most likely print it out. Another reason for printing it, is that I tend to reread the stories I particularly like … few times :). Good luck with investments
09-09-2004
Abe Froman

I'd love to see more of:

A Slave to Politics by SpeechMasterOne

Melinda's Humiliation by Paul

Casino by Thundrshark