Sexual Book

I bought a journal type book, and was going to write my fiance a sexual story about the two of us in it. I was wondering if the authors (or members) could give me any ideas. He is into mind control (although I don't know if he'd like to use it on me), 3 somes with another girl, slight dominance of me (he has moods), and he is getting into liking his arse played with.

I like to be his submissive, dominating other girls, 3some with another girl and him, breast/nipple play (light torture), wax, teased for an orgasm, anal, and spanking.

I'm kinda new to writing these kinda of stories, but we are a really sexual couple, and I think he would love this! I just kinda don't know where to start. Course now that I'm typing this things are coming to mind, (he likes to look out the apt window at girls changing:)) so I'm thinking that would be a good way to start.

But if you had ideas, scenario's, etc, I would be so grateful if you could respond. I'm aiming for his bday in March, but would love to get it done sooner. I'm so critical of my work, but if I like it I'll post it on the site.

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Originally Posted by Kelli

I was wondering if the authors (or members) could give me any ideas. He is into mind control (although I don't know if he'd like to use it on me), 3 somes with another girl, slight dominance of me (he has moods), and he is getting into liking his arse played with.

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Try imagining a life if you lived as his slave. Imagine what circumstances it might take to get you there, and extrapolate.

That's kind of a problem. He wouldn't like me as his slave. He is more vanilla (I've broken him of a lot of it), but even when he dominates me it's not for long (just a playing session), and even then he doesn't treat me like a slave. He just has some control of me, etc.

I know he is fascinated by mind control, but I've only read some stories about it, so I'm not sure how to approach it.

Not sure if I can help but I’m willing to take a stab at it. I would start with what you know he likes, so he likes to look out the apartment window at changing girls. Is there one woman in particular that stands out, if so I would use here as the bases of the 3rd woman in the story. Or you could have him first see this woman in the story through her widow one night as she is changing.

Mind control has never been my thing but maybe you two go to a conference on hypnotism that teaches you how to unleash a persons hidden desires. From you description of your and his interests it does not sound like you want this story to be to rough so it should not be two hard to draw out her (the third women’s) desires. Maybe she has a bad habit that needs breaking and hypnotism and a little kinky 3-way sex would be just the thing to do it. Maybe she agrees to be spanked when she fails and is rewarded in other ways when shew has been good.

Anyways those are just a few ideas, and good luck!

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Originally Posted by Kelli

That's kind of a problem. He wouldn't like me as his slave. He is more vanilla (I've broken him of a lot of it), but even when he dominates me it's not for long (just a playing session), and even then he doesn't treat me like a slave. He just has some control of me, etc.

I know he is fascinated by mind control, but I've only read some stories about it, so I'm not sure how to approach it.

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You could look here:http://www.mcstories.com/

This is an archive of Mind control storys. Always love a Zombified Woman under my control :)

Kellie you are under my power, You will do my biding ... and all that stuff

As for the story you could start it off that you were in your old apartment that so happened to be across the street and he saw you dressing taking a bath. So he ended up meeting you at the local pub. SO he slipped you this secret mind control drug into your guinnes. That made you very subsiptible to hypnosis So when he says carrot top you turn to a maniquin but you will follow his slightest whim. Im sure it would not be to hard to take it from there.

Lots of good storys in the archive and it is free.

Have a good time
Mobius

One of the big erotic attractions in Mind Control is that the controller gets to have all his desires met without the risk of having to come out and ask for them. It's total power with no responsibility.

Probably the most common story device for MC is hypnotism, and I could see your BF being a master hypnotist and you his assistant, luring attractive young ladies backstage after his shows for all sort of perverse pleasures. Maybe one of these girls is the virginal daughter of his arch nemesis and your BF's out for revenge. You can do all sorts of wonderful stuff with post-hypnotic suggestion too, like making people have sex in public or turning sweet, young things into raging sluts.

Another good device are drugs. A little sprinkled on someone's food or in their wine and they're yours to command.

In any case, I wouldn't worry too much about overall plot. Go with the hypnotism thing and you can just do whatever you want with anyone. It's all fantasy anyhow.

---dr.M.

The bulk of my erotic writing has been MC, though I am now in the midst of a more overtly BDSM work. MC is certainly about the person yielding control, because they are generally mentally changed so that they want to do the things the controller desires of them, where as BDSM tends to be more about forcing them to do those things through various methods. For me MC is also about personality change, usually the person ends up with a different name and sexual tastes, e.g. an assertive woman with normal names goes from being straight and wearing plain clothes to wanting to be a latex-wearing, lesbian submissive with just a collar name.

Maybe in your case, the MC would be what would start you taking an interest in the other woman for the threesome, and her too. Maybe the other woman is a friend, that he would like to control too, or maybe a complete stranger that you pick up somewhere. Threesomes can be dangerous for long-term relationships, so the MC element can bring in a bit of a fuse, as it is not really you who is getting off with the third party because you are under MC (which can be temporary or permanent in stories) which you could be later released from, returning you to the status quo ante.

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Originally Posted by Kelli

But if you had ideas, scenario's, etc, I would be so grateful if you could respond. I'm aiming for his bday in March, but would love to get it done sooner. I'm so critical of my work, but if I like it I'll post it on the site.

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If you don't mind me putting my two penneth in. I can't speak for your partner but I can speak for myself. If the sexual gratification comes too easily it's not a turn on. OK it might be a wank job but it's not deeply and psychologically a turn on that will bring me back to the story time and again. Even with ones partner who is willing to give everything you want and whenever you want it, you still have to work at keeping the relationship going to be in that situation. The problem I have with a lot of stories on this site is that the sex comes too easily. You want sex, rape her! You want sex, she's anyone's slut! OK we all want a slut but it's nice if she is just MY slut and that involves work, which maybe manipulation and cunning or other deviousness or just pure charm.

Well, a lot of time has passed since the last post, including your finace's birthday, but at this late date I have something to share:

I just posted something for "Rocky" on the thread "Suggestions Requested" on thought reform. check it out.