Just put my first story up, "Staisfying Stephanie". I'd be interested to hear any criticisms (or praise!)...
Printable View
Just put my first story up, "Staisfying Stephanie". I'd be interested to hear any criticisms (or praise!)...
:wel
I'll be reading it at my first oppurtunity and come back here to tell you what I think.
Thanks! I'm pretty nervous to be honest... took me soooo long to screw up the courage to post it!
Very well done. I'm not into F/m stories so it didn't turn me on (but switch it to M/f and I'd have a raging hardon).
I was impressed with the grammar and spelling (I caught only one error -- 'tounge' should be 'tongue'), although I couldn't understand why there was so much white space between paragraphs (but maybe this is not your fault).
If it means anything to you, it read like a true story.
Congratulations (both for the prose and the guts to post it).
Glad you did find the courage as this is very well written.BTW I gave you a "9" rating on my review.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Wistan
Thanks folks!
Not sure about the white space thing, I submitted it as a txt file so it's likely a formatting thing in the conversion to html.
And no, it's not a remotely true story - I only wish it were!
It's obvious browsing the archive that M/F is predominant here, but it's never really been my thing - I struggle to get through M/F stories to be honest, even if they're good ones. To each their own...
It's not really my thing either, but the story is very well written and has a character depth usually missing from those kinds of stories. Well done.