A SLAVE'S ROAD
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A SLAVE'S ROAD
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=34
Have you read it?
Why is it rated so High?
What are your views on this story?
All honest opinions are welcome about the Story----
Not yet... guess I should go take a look.
Extremely well written. Excellent command of language and 'tempo.' I was impressed with the author's willingness to devote the whole first chapter to setting up the scenario and introducing the main character, without getting too much into the actual action.
The second chapter begins the subjects subjugation and again, the author seems in no rush to hurry the action or 'do everything at once.' A step here and a step there.
If the content was more to my taste, I would put it on my bookshelf and be on the watch for updates.
i have to admit that i have not read this yet - but, i saved it in my faves and i will read it as soon as i can and offer whatever feedback i can
I have not read it all. I read enough to see it was not my cup of tea, I'm not into that particular kink.
However I also read enough to say that it was very well written. Excellent in fact. Just the right speed, with a dash of realism & a pinch of humour.
I'm impressed.
Tojo
Well it is something ---our young authors should read ---as it is well written--and an example of what to strive for
I agree that the writing of the story appears to be above the average. I did not go into the tale very far - not my type of story. But, if the eroticism is as good for that genre as it appears, the writing technique is certainly enough to warrant high ratings.