Take it All in

Something I wrote a while ago:

Take it All in

Whisper, whisper, in my ear
All the things that I've come to fear

Swallow, swallow my bitter taste
The understated feel of your embrace

Brush, brush, my tangled hair
Clearing the tangles of my care

Breathe, breathe upon my skin
Piercing my pores like a sharp metal pin

Wipe, wipe away my tears
Read in them my darkest fears

Kiss, kiss my bleeding lips
Reading my reaction through two clenched fists

Stare, stare into my eyes
See into me, my world of lies

Hold, hold my entire self
Take it all in

Until theres nothing left.

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Good job on that.

Now, this is poem of new proportions...very well done...you did wonderful job.