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Bleeding Roses
Bleeding Roses
Bleeding roses gripping
Beneath the calling
Almost whispering, humming
A moment of beauty
A chance of reflection marking it’s place
The rainbow fire lights my way
Past the wailing walls of rejection
Lack of protection
Gambling at my chances
Of making things right
My whimpering heart
Is the gentle rhythm in my ears
Covering generated stings
Sloping through my veins
Again I get flustered, jitters like bugs
Fill me and tighten up the knots
Dreams of becoming someone new
Monumental kisses captured
By slow moving lips
In a moment of silence
In past memories in my head
Determined to change all that it once was
Chops through the narrow section of my mind
A dim view of life that raised
Astounding vines
That carried with it, the bleeding roses.
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smiles,, you do have a way wink and thanks
Master Rob
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Striking A Chord
This is a superb poem in that it captures all the elements
of your feelings and creates such visual imagery.
It takes pure heart and personal depth to convey
what a person feels and envisons and express them
with the written word.
To see the person if only just a bit in how they use
those words is the best gift of all.
Very well done!!!
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Wonderful job! Can't wait to see more!
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Just like you, my F(r)iend, this runs like a shadow, and slips from the grasp, but to me it seems to be about something transient and beautiful but painful and perhaps damaged, just suriviving at great cost against all that threatens it.
Or maybe I am talking bollocks again.
CC
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Well, FiENdish FiENd, thank you for your help in understanding your poem, and an even bigger thank you for letting us see into that moment in your life.
A very big and loving hug.
cariad
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Thank you Master Rob for always being the greatest friend....
Thank you Scorpio'sWill2Power for your kind words, it inspired me to want to share more.
Thank you Super Bitch.
Thank you Colin and Cariad your friendship has meant the world to me and I love hearing both of your feedback and advice that you give me. On my creative pieces and in life in general.
Thank you ALL.
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