Wakening of REALization

we should focus on what to do,
not what not to do;
told what to do,
and do only what told to do!

"OH YES MISTRESS"

nothing to gain,
mere slaves of pain,
which hold no name;
& forever address the same

"YES MISTRESS"

collar and cuff, alone in the buff;
on the floor, an unworthy whore;
all alone...

"...MISTRESS?"



I hope people enjoy this, I tried writing a poem for the first time the other day as a dedication which went terribly wrong :( Lets hope this sounds better to people.

Sounds good to me.

I liked it.

Good job there, dont worry just wirte as you feel, smiles I know i have placed a poem here.

Not bad at all.