I'll Never Tell

For all the girls and women who have that naughty little fantasy they just can't quite get out of their mind.

I'll Never Tell

A dark dream
That lay within you
A desire unfulfilled
You couldn’t take it to him

Trust me
I’ll never tell

So nervous at first
You doubt yourself
But you never asked me to stop
As I bound you tight

Don’t worry
I’ll never tell

Your eyes trapped
Between uncertainty and lust
As you opened your mouth
To accept my gag

Shhhhhh… that’s better
I’ll never tell

My hands roamed your body
It wasn’t long until
Your fear was leaving you
For something else

You’re trying to squirm
I’ll never tell

My lips, my hands, roaming free
Your body now my playground
Your soft moans taking over
That’s right girl, don’t fight, just let it go…

I promise
I’ll never tell

That was real good, I liked it sooooo much. Great job!!!!!!

Damn that was hot.

Nice poem Wolf. I like things with repetinivness.

Thanks to all three of you.

hehe your turning into quite the poet as well. I liked this one too. good job as always

Thanks very much Widget.

I have no idea what 'good' poetry looks like...for me it's always just a feeling I either get or don't. My feeling here...dammit, I want to be on the receiving end of this poem, lol. :D It really got me!

Lovely poem, Timberwolf. Thank you, for posting.

I also know nothing about poetry, except what works for me; and that worked Timberwolf. Keep writing.

cariad

Add my voice to those who claim to know nothing about poetry. I make no claim to any formal training outside of school, lol. If people read my writing and feel something, I must be doing something right. That's about as far as my method spreads.

Thanks to all three of you, I'm glad people enjoyed it.

Just read it .. I liked it too...it just ...well works...

Thanks ladywrites.

That was great TW. i really enjoyed it!

That was beautiful Timberwolf, thankyou for sharing it with us. I truly loved it.

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Originally Posted by Timberwolf

If people read my writing and feel something, I must be doing something right.

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That is what writing is all about.

I really liked this poem. I wonder...had you taken this one a little further how much more hynotic and powerful it would be. You are very talented. I love reading your peoms.

SB

Thanks frankee, poetic_justice, and S_B (I can't get used to typing out "bitch" for you... it just doesn't seem right ;) ), it's good to hear so much positive feedback.