tears of pleasure

A luminous candle, my only light
Its tears sting, slowly they fall
I my not move, not once this night
Promises broken, as I grow tall
My punishment, this thrilling fright
Manhood impaled, can this be real
Forced inside, holding with all my might
All I want know, can this be all I feel

I never really did erotic poems before, but there allot of fun to think up. It’s like releasing pain, in a sexy way.:p

Lovely poem, Likafox. Thank you for posting :) I like your style, its intense and present.

I like your style and the way in which you
convey thought to the written word.

This shows a true depth of emotion and is
very nicely done!!!

I agree with the others..very nicely done...yes poetry is a release in a more concise way.