A haiku
Fear not the master
The whip only stings to teach
absents is your fear
This would be my first try on a haiku, please let me now how to better it.
I’m not sure its erotic but ehh depends how you decipher it.
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A haiku
Fear not the master
The whip only stings to teach
absents is your fear
This would be my first try on a haiku, please let me now how to better it.
I’m not sure its erotic but ehh depends how you decipher it.
The whip only stings to teach
(absence/absent) is your fear...
I really love this haiku poem. Strong message and lesson.
Thanks for sharing.
I do like this...very good. I can't think of anything I would change except what incredulous pointed out.
Keep going with this.