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Lily26 requested that her poem contain the words:
squirm
forbidden
whimper
LIMITS
He holds her gaze,
waiting patiently
for the knowledge
to dawn in her trusting eyes:
that she is His, now
and He will wring from her
every whimper
every moan,
every helpless, futile
squirm
with consummate, careless ease.
HIs patience is rewarded
her eyes widen
her breath quickens
at the realization
that every
single
act
that she has not forbidden Him
now awaits her.
"her breath quickens
at the realization
that every
single
act
that she has not forbidden Him
now awaits her."
Lily, you asked the other day what do Doms get out of submission, there's a pretty fine answer. ;)
As usual elyse, you have done a wonderful job, and given us somethign quite entertaining to read.
thank you! i really hope lily likes it!Quote:
Originally Posted by Timberwolf
I have now had the pleasure of reading some of what you have written. If I ever have the pleasure of writing anything with you, I will have to be far more complex and imaginative to at all amuse you.
Wow! What a breathtaking poem! Wonderful!
thank you! i've never had a poem called breathtaking before :)
elyse,
As always...your writing captivates the mind and the heart.
Hmmm this poem is indeed beautiful, not unlike lily's spirit. I'm sure she will read this and be thrilled.
I loved it elyse, you are truly talented and I think lily will love it too.
That really is a beautiful poem! Well done.
Wow, elyse this is my favourite of your work thus far (and that is saying a lot!). I just love it!
Not only did you use the words I gave you, you managed to completely encapsulate how I have been feeling lately as well.
Thank you!!
*blushes and smiles*Quote:
Originally Posted by Mack_Bolan
I loved it elyse!
wonderful elyse
*hats off to the poet*
nicely done, elyse!
*off to read more*