Unmarked

Unmarked

I bear no sign
Or name, or bruise
I bear no sign
That I’ve been used

I want the sting
Upon my skin
I want the sting
To come again

I feel so dirty
Make me clean again?
Don’t leave me this way
Don’t leave me unmarked

I’ve got no pain
From small red welts
I’ve got no pain
Like I once felt

I want to prove
That I am yours
I want to prove
That I’m your whore

I feel so dirty
Make me clean again?
Don’t leave me this way
Don’t leave me unmarked

Don’t leave me unmarked

Oooooo....I like this. A lot. Makes me also want marks.

Very much reminds me of when I *need* to be in sub-mode. I like it a lot.

Thanks a lot angel. :)

WOW

I love this Timberwolf, its amazingly written :)

Very good poem (Think Ill be saying this alot, this place has some good tallent)

Thank you very much p_j, I'm glad you loved it. :)

And thanks vampyres too, always good to know that new people are coming in and enjoying what we've got here too.

Ohhh I love this Twolf.

I can see a few meanings in this. Were they intended?

Glad you loved it, and as for the multiple meanings aside from the physical there is an element I went for of the mental mark a partner leaves on someone as well. Though mainly I at least wrote it thinking about marking itself, and the psycological impact of it for me.

I really love this, too TW. As sheepish says, there are several levels it can be understood at, so I think each reader will be able to feel a relevance to themselves, to their own experience, even if that is not the same relevance as to the writer. And that makes a powerful poem, if it can speak in a different language to all. I love the change in rhythm, too. Accentuates the plea.

Thank you moptop, I'm glad you found relevance in it, and that you enjoyed it.

This poem made me all gello and mush inside. They described much of how I feel myself.
Your words are so bare and raw, and to me they create a longing and a sorrow that borders desperation. I loved your poem Timberwolf. Thank you so much for sharing it.

If I've made you all mushy inside my lady, it was a good day. ;)

*swoons and mushes*
;)

*sigh* Incredible and awesome Tw!!

Always enjoy your writing!

Thanks very much frankee, glad you liked it.

this is beautiful TimberWolf...achingly beautiful. Thank you

The marks are there, Timberwolf........I can hear them echoing in your soul...........beautiful...

Timberwolf...that was amazing...

Thank you Echoes, Valkyrie, and Talia for all your kind words. They are appreciated. :)

TW. This is a really good piece of work. I like the way it goes together. It really doesn't do much for me as a Dom, but I can see how it would speak to a submissive personality .. especially one with a bit of a pain thing going on. Well done

Thank you very much TheDeSade.

powerful stuff, Twolf.

I bear no sign
that i've been used

we all bear marks, of course -- it's just that most of them aren't visible to the naked eye. And we sometimes need those outward signs -- visible, tangible evidence that this is more than mere fantasy.

this is my brain on ramble mode.... sorry... loved the poem, Twolf... i'll be quiet now...

You make a good point about the marks inside... I think we all have our share. I'm glad you loved the poem. :)