Rage

Rage
Rage and torment
Inwardly turned
Sorrowed

Unfeeling
Not hearing, not seeing
Stupidly Done
Ignoring

Devastated
Self loathing abounds
Emotions done
Fear

Sorrowed
Beginnings ended before
Really begun
Lost

Not easy. Disjointed. Appropriate to the emotions. Spitting anger. Resigned in sorrow. Brings emptiness of loss at end. I think this is one that might grow on me.

Very nice I can definitely relate to this today

Very nice indeed

Nice one TDS.

I can really feel the emotions behind this poem, and certainly have been able to relate to it.