how did i do ?

my King
@)~~`~~~~~~~~

Paul{k}

my Master, my King….my soul to You I bare….
my surrender, so grand….no Royalty compares….
my arms, reach forth….longing Your embrace…
my love, so deep….no mortal words can trace…
my breath, in echos….inhaling Your wants and needs…
my lips, so warm….exhaling Your trust and lead…
my mind, spellbound….thinking selfishly of You…
my voice, in chorus….praising God in tune….
my One, I adore You….my inner being in awe…
my Master, I am Yours….my beauty and my flaws…
my eyes, glimmer brightly….as You look at me…
my rescue, in Your arms….my soul You set it free…
my blessings, granted….once wishes, now opened doors..
my King You stand before me, I kneel, forever Yours…

Master's slave and soulmate,

appreciate your commitment ,devotion
and concern for your Master.
nicely composed and worded.
Intelligent piece of work.

wish..............:D

*smiles*......thank You Sir for the compliment, and welcome to the boards !

Master's slave and soulmate,

Indeed it is a nice piece of work.

But.........

it cannot be only intelligence......
or words or nice composure..........
that brings out this .......
commitment..love..trust..devotion..concern...

there has to be the inspiration.............
from that somebody special.......
That worthy Master........
The IDEAL MASTER.



:D .Wish....I can find somebody similar slave and soulmate..
who can bring out similar Master in JacKaL