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75 bucks and a pussy licking until you cum 10 times.
I have stories with plots!
One in particular is still ongoing - 7 chapters so far. It's a story about a brother-sister spanking relationship (but it's not an incest story).
The story starts in the "present day" for the first two chapters, and then proceeds to use flashbacks to explain how the two main characters got to where they are.
There is a lot of [I feel] interesting psychological exploration. After I'd written the first few chapters, I realized that I was kind of splitting my own personality into these two characters. Surprisingly (or maybe not so surprisingly) there is more of "me" coming through the submissive sister, even though I'm a Top. There's also a bit of my younger sister in that character too.
I'll submit the series soon. There are a few inconsistencies that have crept into the story that I'd like to go back and correct.
But there's definitely a plot. Ironically, the story started out as a "one-off". A scene idea just popped into my head and I banged the story out in an hour or two. I didn't intend for it to become a series. So the first chapter really has no plot per se - and it's a concept that I'm sure has been done many times before. But then the main characters practically started writing themselves. Chapter two is where it starts getting interesting.
Oh yeah, my favorite story codes:
M/f & F/f, or multiples thereof - with the lowercase "f" specifically denoting "teen female" as opposed to "submissive female". I generally consider the slash in gender codes to indicate Dom to the left, sub to the right. By letting the lowercase letter indicate a teen, it saves having to use the separate "teen" code. It also makes it easier to indicate those instances when perhaps, say, an older brother is helping mom and dad punish little sister, like so: MFm/f. Just my opinion, anyway.
So of course, I like "teen".
"spanking" - my favorite kink
"bdsm" I like to spank other things, too :D
"rape" - I like reading different approaches. Rape stories also appeal to my "domination" interests in a way that spanking and whipping don't.
"incest" - something I've only recently gotten into. I actually wrote a bit of sister/sister lesbian incest many years ago, but only in the last couple years wrote some brother/sister incest. And then only very recently some Daddy/daughter stuff. It actually took me a while before I could bring myself to write the D/d variety. I enjoy reading other author's approaches, but have been a bit disappointed in the way the scenarios are so similar from one story to the next. Not that my published effort has been much better. I have some unpublished stuff that I think goes in a new direction, but I'm sure somebody else has probably written something similar. But it's different from most of what I've seen. I hope to have some of it ready for publication soon.
"interracial" - but not stereotypical black-on-white stuff. I prefer interracial scenes where the character's races are incidental. Mainly, I like people of different races in a story just for added realism and variety. And one of these days, I'd like to find some good color photos of a spanked black girl so that I can find out if one of my own descriptions was anywhere near accurate (as to the coloring of her bottom as she was paddled.)
"slavery" - I'm reconstructing a (never published) series that I lost in a hard drive accident. A sort of brothel that keeps teenage sex slaves.
I generally prefer non-consensual scenes, though "reluctant" can be fun. I also like stories that may have started out nc but eventually developed into consensual - I'm thinking a bit different from "reluctant".
I like "Serious" stories. Not into extreme stuff - breaking the skin and drawing blood doesn't do it for me.
well well... my first post :p
but back to the original topic, it doesnt matter who the author is cos i tend to give most of the stories a shot, but i avoid those F/f, F/m and M/m kinds :p mc and nc stories are good, and i kinda have a thing for the daddy daughter stories :p
Anything but animal, just doesn't interest me one bit, now where did that pretty sheep get to:D Here Blodwyn, here girl:D
Seriously not animal folks, I consider beast sex more perverse than kiddie sex, at least a kid can say no. (Whether anyone listens to the kid or not is immaterial).
I write all sorts, some extreme, some mild, but none beasty or overly underage perverse. You name it, Incest, rape, fantasy, gang bang, torture, slut wife, the lot.
I have yet to post any of my purile crap here however.
pops...........:D
Yes:
Chastity Belt, Enema, modification, SciFi, Latex
No:
M/m, interracial, transgender, scat, snuff
Yes, I don't like scat. You can fill them up with water or any other liquid, and as long as you don't get too close to what comes out, it's fine with me :) Am I picky?
Torture can be okay, as long as it doesn't end up with permanant mutilation. The minute things start getting torn or cut off, I hit the little X button in the top right.
And every now and then, a little consensual to appease my soft side ;)
...i wouldn't read a story if it wasn't M/f, i may read it if it had other combo's in it as well, but not if it didn't have that. i would be less likely to read scat, latex and feet, oh and blackmail because they usually end up being a bit tame or having a bit of a daft plot (i am of course generalising here), i wouldn't read F/m or M/m.
i have started to find though that stories that don't sound very appealing from their codes end up being good, so if i had the time i would at least cast an eye over most things.
sl
I am not picky on the codes since I am lookin for plot as well as erotica.
I usually go by the the author's write up to see if I want to read it.
But incest, bestiality and snuff are real turn offs.
I clicked on a couple of those out of curiosity and confirmed my initial reaction. Nope, not for me.
I do read the M/f first, but will eventually look at some of the others.
If the story is well written, I'll enjoy it, even if its not a big turn on
for me personally.
You could try stories written by my Sire ...Quote:
Originally posted by Marcus
PLOT story code.
I guess I was thinking of stories that might be borderline mainstream; ones that can be read for the enjoyment of reading as well as being erotic. Maybe we readers find these out for ourselves once we become familiar with the output of particular writers.
If anyone else can contribute a few other such author names I'd be interested in knowing about them.
Fox
there is "Fore!Play" "Big Girls Don't Cry", many others,
Fox's stories have plots and character development, not just whips and chains and porn.
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Originally posted by LadyAmanda
anyone want to buy a ill-mannered sub?
Hmmm, I discuss this with Fox, maybe we make an offer. He is always wanting to test out new ideas, and it would be nice to have someone else as his subject.
And then I will get to play with her too!
...Fox's stories are really well written and genuinely good 'storytelling' as well as BDSM content.
sl
Back on page one, Harold noted that the "Real" code was overused (and should be restricted unless photographic proof could be provided). Perhaps, but the thing I noticed is that there is nothing for just "kidnapped girl sex story". I have two stories on bdsmlibrary (under a pseudonym), and both are labeled "Real". Needless to say, I have not kidnapped any females in my life (nor do I plan to). However, my stories have the "Real" code simply because they don't fall under anything else. In one story, the age of the female is unspecified, and in another, the girl is High-School age but it has nothing to do with a High School setting.
definitely my favourite sort of story is women dominating women, master/slave stuff, really hardcore, forced/no consent, lots of serious cruelty, full-on bdsm, lots of anal sex, strap-on, teat torture, and the like, but funnily enough, oral's not high on my list. also, piss is good, but i don't care for scat.
I agree that humor is hard to do well. I have only tried it once (Halloween Sucks!) and I got mixed feedback. A few loved it and many others didn't know I was trying to be funny.Quote:
Originally posted by Marcus
More humorous tales would be good!
Apparently, humour is the hardest thing to write. I'm tempted to say that porn/erotica is probably the easiest.
If you find any stories that made you laugh (intentionally!) please let me know.
Bill
I have to agree with bdsmbill, writing humor is very hard, partly because everyone has a different sense of humor. I try to keep away from 'spoof' story code for that reason. I've read a few of them and have yet to find any humor in one.
[Spoof: 1. a mocking imitation of someone or something, usually light and good-humored. 2. a hoax; prank. 3. to mock lightly and good humoredly; kid. 4. to fool by a hoax; play a trick on, especially one intended to deceive. 5. to scoff at something lightly...]
It would appear that the predominating definitions used in the Library are 2 and 4 because I certainly feel deceived every time I read one.
To get back on-thread, my favorite codes are school, college, job (all of which are abused; just because a character is in high school or has a job doesn't qualify. The school or job has to be relevant to the sex), anything/f, and anything harder than serious. F-self is also good.
Oh yea, codes.... Unlike many, I like F/m, but also like M/f. Some of my favorites are stories that start out one way and then the lower case person turns the tables and the story switches.Quote:
Originally posted by Curtis
To get back on-thread, my favorite codes are school, college, job (all of which are abused; just because a character is in high school or has a job doesn't qualify. The school or job has to be relevant to the sex), anything/f, and anything harder than serious. F-self is also good.
I don't like snuff, incest, zoo, or scat. I am ambivelent about anal -- too often it is just the obligatory "I need to use all three holes" scene.
I don't think "real" means it really happened, just that it "could" really happen.
My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
I like NC, CBT, blackmail, and a few others.
Bill
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Originally posted by bdsmbill
My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
Funny note about that:
Many authors don't seem to really know what the numbers behind bra size really mean. A woman with a 42 bust size is going to have some girth, unless she has some kind of deformity in her rib cage. It would be extraordinarily unlikely that she would have a 29 inch waist.
I think a lot of authors would do well to buy a bra (or go to Wal-Mart and look at a package) and see what bust size really is.
I could not agree with you more bdsmbill, that code should exist.Quote:
Originally posted by bdsmbill
My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
The codes I usually look for are:
Anything, M, F, Mf, Ff, M+, F+/f. It has got to happen to a girl.
The golden combination: torture & consensual. Just like my fantasies.
More important, however is an interesting synopsis. Not just a description, but a teaser.
Codes I avoid: size (see above), watersports, scat, transgender, young, bestiality and spoof. These are total turnoffs.
I guess I should have reviewed the story codes first... there are so many of them. Without refreshing my memory ...
They are the first thing I look at, before the author's name
Yes: Fs, M/f, D/s, exhibition, humiliation
No: M/m, scat, snuff, pedophilia
bdsmbill staed:
Quote: "My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
My question is:
When I read these stories, I wonder if the authors know how bra sizes are measured? The 42 is the measurement of her back UNDER THE BREASTS! The DD would be the cup size, so a woman who wore a bra that size would have a bustline of maybe 50 inches or more!
For example, a woman who wears a 34C (She would wear this size if she were anywhere from 30 to 34 inches around her back since the bras are adjustable) has a bustline (measuring across the tops of her breasts with her bra on) of 36-39 inches or so depending on her back measurements. Her breasts are big enough to fit in a C cup. A woman with a wider back would wear a 36C or 38C etc., each woman would be bigger across the back but all three would have the same size breasts more or less. (The cup size does increase slightly with the back measurement increase). Their bust lines would be different sizes though, but this would be because of the differences in the width of their backs, not the size of their breasts. The bigger the number measurement, the wider back the woman has, not the bigger breasts. So, the next time you think of a woman who wears a 42 bra, think of a man with a 38-42 inch chest to get an idea of how big her back would be.
I wouldn't have thought it necessary to explain this, but the number of stories I see with outrageous measurements is what made me decide to post this info.
By the way, bra sizes vary almost as much as clothes sizes. The same woman may wear a 34D in one style and a 36C in another.
This is probably too much information, so I'll shush now.
hi all great thread
enjoyed it lots
my favorite codes are m/f mc slave teen
humilation blackmail.
but like to try a little of it all
just for a balance view.
best story ever was a story about
puppy girls.
would love to find some more of them
if anyone knows a site pls advise
*I enjoy forced sex(NC), young(sometime very young), and snuff above all.
*I don't like fetish.
I dont really look at the codes, i just read the synopsis
Hmm...
I suppose I appreciate a good, accurate synopsis more then the codes.
However I do have some that can make me curious.
Gendercodes:
I don't like anything F/...
M/m not really either...
so... everything M/f is nice with me, also M/mf can be intersting.
Sexual Activites:
Teen (Really, being quite young myself it kinda turns me off to read stuff about women in their mid thirties... *shrugs* - no offense it's just... not my thing.)
For the rest it really depends on how it is interpretated...
But I absolutely can't realy cbt. *shudders*
Fetish:
All quite ok except for feet or hair - really that always makes me grin. *lol* and I hate my own feet.
Theme setting:
Everything but Sci/fi.
Favs are historical or fantasy. But all the real life stuff is ok too - just that it tends to be all the same. I mean the tale of a naughty student or the lazy secretary is kinda... pulease!
Level of consent:
My favs are romantic, reluctant and blackmail *shrugs* Mind controll is kinda yucky. Oh and I HATE subs screaming harder, deeper etc.
and I don't like the too extreme stuff. The dom should have that loving thing - else I just don't get what would make the sub enduring all that if all what she EVER get's is cruelty. lol I wouldn't ;)