...Fox's stories are really well written and genuinely good 'storytelling' as well as BDSM content.
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...Fox's stories are really well written and genuinely good 'storytelling' as well as BDSM content.
sl
Back on page one, Harold noted that the "Real" code was overused (and should be restricted unless photographic proof could be provided). Perhaps, but the thing I noticed is that there is nothing for just "kidnapped girl sex story". I have two stories on bdsmlibrary (under a pseudonym), and both are labeled "Real". Needless to say, I have not kidnapped any females in my life (nor do I plan to). However, my stories have the "Real" code simply because they don't fall under anything else. In one story, the age of the female is unspecified, and in another, the girl is High-School age but it has nothing to do with a High School setting.
definitely my favourite sort of story is women dominating women, master/slave stuff, really hardcore, forced/no consent, lots of serious cruelty, full-on bdsm, lots of anal sex, strap-on, teat torture, and the like, but funnily enough, oral's not high on my list. also, piss is good, but i don't care for scat.
I agree that humor is hard to do well. I have only tried it once (Halloween Sucks!) and I got mixed feedback. A few loved it and many others didn't know I was trying to be funny.Quote:
Originally posted by Marcus
More humorous tales would be good!
Apparently, humour is the hardest thing to write. I'm tempted to say that porn/erotica is probably the easiest.
If you find any stories that made you laugh (intentionally!) please let me know.
Bill
I have to agree with bdsmbill, writing humor is very hard, partly because everyone has a different sense of humor. I try to keep away from 'spoof' story code for that reason. I've read a few of them and have yet to find any humor in one.
[Spoof: 1. a mocking imitation of someone or something, usually light and good-humored. 2. a hoax; prank. 3. to mock lightly and good humoredly; kid. 4. to fool by a hoax; play a trick on, especially one intended to deceive. 5. to scoff at something lightly...]
It would appear that the predominating definitions used in the Library are 2 and 4 because I certainly feel deceived every time I read one.
To get back on-thread, my favorite codes are school, college, job (all of which are abused; just because a character is in high school or has a job doesn't qualify. The school or job has to be relevant to the sex), anything/f, and anything harder than serious. F-self is also good.
Oh yea, codes.... Unlike many, I like F/m, but also like M/f. Some of my favorites are stories that start out one way and then the lower case person turns the tables and the story switches.Quote:
Originally posted by Curtis
To get back on-thread, my favorite codes are school, college, job (all of which are abused; just because a character is in high school or has a job doesn't qualify. The school or job has to be relevant to the sex), anything/f, and anything harder than serious. F-self is also good.
I don't like snuff, incest, zoo, or scat. I am ambivelent about anal -- too often it is just the obligatory "I need to use all three holes" scene.
I don't think "real" means it really happened, just that it "could" really happen.
My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
I like NC, CBT, blackmail, and a few others.
Bill
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Originally posted by bdsmbill
My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
Funny note about that:
Many authors don't seem to really know what the numbers behind bra size really mean. A woman with a 42 bust size is going to have some girth, unless she has some kind of deformity in her rib cage. It would be extraordinarily unlikely that she would have a 29 inch waist.
I think a lot of authors would do well to buy a bra (or go to Wal-Mart and look at a package) and see what bust size really is.
I could not agree with you more bdsmbill, that code should exist.Quote:
Originally posted by bdsmbill
My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
The codes I usually look for are:
Anything, M, F, Mf, Ff, M+, F+/f. It has got to happen to a girl.
The golden combination: torture & consensual. Just like my fantasies.
More important, however is an interesting synopsis. Not just a description, but a teaser.
Codes I avoid: size (see above), watersports, scat, transgender, young, bestiality and spoof. These are total turnoffs.
I guess I should have reviewed the story codes first... there are so many of them. Without refreshing my memory ...
They are the first thing I look at, before the author's name
Yes: Fs, M/f, D/s, exhibition, humiliation
No: M/m, scat, snuff, pedophilia
bdsmbill staed:
Quote: "My personal turnoff? WAY too many stories get too specific with descriptions. You know: "I checked out her 42DDD, 28, 39 hot, sexy body." The same thing applies to cocks. Maybe there should be a code for "Fantasy sized cock."
My question is:
When I read these stories, I wonder if the authors know how bra sizes are measured? The 42 is the measurement of her back UNDER THE BREASTS! The DD would be the cup size, so a woman who wore a bra that size would have a bustline of maybe 50 inches or more!
For example, a woman who wears a 34C (She would wear this size if she were anywhere from 30 to 34 inches around her back since the bras are adjustable) has a bustline (measuring across the tops of her breasts with her bra on) of 36-39 inches or so depending on her back measurements. Her breasts are big enough to fit in a C cup. A woman with a wider back would wear a 36C or 38C etc., each woman would be bigger across the back but all three would have the same size breasts more or less. (The cup size does increase slightly with the back measurement increase). Their bust lines would be different sizes though, but this would be because of the differences in the width of their backs, not the size of their breasts. The bigger the number measurement, the wider back the woman has, not the bigger breasts. So, the next time you think of a woman who wears a 42 bra, think of a man with a 38-42 inch chest to get an idea of how big her back would be.
I wouldn't have thought it necessary to explain this, but the number of stories I see with outrageous measurements is what made me decide to post this info.
By the way, bra sizes vary almost as much as clothes sizes. The same woman may wear a 34D in one style and a 36C in another.
This is probably too much information, so I'll shush now.
hi all great thread
enjoyed it lots
my favorite codes are m/f mc slave teen
humilation blackmail.
but like to try a little of it all
just for a balance view.
best story ever was a story about
puppy girls.
would love to find some more of them
if anyone knows a site pls advise
*I enjoy forced sex(NC), young(sometime very young), and snuff above all.
*I don't like fetish.
I dont really look at the codes, i just read the synopsis
Hmm...
I suppose I appreciate a good, accurate synopsis more then the codes.
However I do have some that can make me curious.
Gendercodes:
I don't like anything F/...
M/m not really either...
so... everything M/f is nice with me, also M/mf can be intersting.
Sexual Activites:
Teen (Really, being quite young myself it kinda turns me off to read stuff about women in their mid thirties... *shrugs* - no offense it's just... not my thing.)
For the rest it really depends on how it is interpretated...
But I absolutely can't realy cbt. *shudders*
Fetish:
All quite ok except for feet or hair - really that always makes me grin. *lol* and I hate my own feet.
Theme setting:
Everything but Sci/fi.
Favs are historical or fantasy. But all the real life stuff is ok too - just that it tends to be all the same. I mean the tale of a naughty student or the lazy secretary is kinda... pulease!
Level of consent:
My favs are romantic, reluctant and blackmail *shrugs* Mind controll is kinda yucky. Oh and I HATE subs screaming harder, deeper etc.
and I don't like the too extreme stuff. The dom should have that loving thing - else I just don't get what would make the sub enduring all that if all what she EVER get's is cruelty. lol I wouldn't ;)