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This second mention of Mr. Spraycan does somewhat intrigue, but could just an inkling as to his/her general tone of writing please be offered for those like me unfamiliar with the work? Or, would a simple search of the 'net suffice?
Pardon spraycannish ignorance on my part and thank you for your help.
For what it's worth Mr Spraycan was, or may still be, one of the most polished writers that ever graced the field. Dominance and submission is what he is all about, but in mostly a subtle way. I think his work generates tremendous "heat" because of the way he insinuates rather than describes the activity. He is urbane and sophisticated with a wickedly depraved imagination. Most of his writing in the erotic field seemed to occur between 1995-1998 and all of it was copyrighted to Baton Rouge Thoughtscapes. At one time it appeared that Lousiana State University was going to publish a collection of his stories entitled Exploding Spraycan, but it failed to come to fruitation. A substantial portion of his work has been posted in ASSM, but I've tracked down even more from various collections that are posted in ASSTR, as well as sites that are no longer in existence. Perhaps the best place to find his work is in the Mr. Double Palisades pay site, which has a very quirky way of presenting things in a rather bizarre version of WinZip.
Thank you Lex Ludite for the wonderful brief on Mr. Spraycan's works, and your patience with my ignorance. Thanks to you, I, and perhaps others, now know a bit more of this individual's talents.
I have a one month of mr Dubbles site of witch I have about 3 days left I did a search for mr spraycan in the palisades authors and found no spraycan.
did he publish under a sudomin?
Is he an international author?
Im am not into pedo although I like a little incest once in a while.
what slant are his writings.
Mr Spraycan posted on the referenced site as late as 1997. I have no idea what kind of achives are contained within that site. I call your attention to my reply to Faibhar on this matter which is posted on this thread. I also sent you independently instructions on how to locate approximately 30 of his stories that were posted on ASSM. Hope this will help matters. As far as pedo is concerned, no chance of that with him. He was mostly into dominance and submission, but subtlely, leaving the more overt aspects to the readers' imagination. I strongly recommend Beth the Compulsive Masturbator as an excellent example of his polished professional writing.
Far more fine writings are availible at this site and others and readers can easily access them, as they choose. L. Ludite, to name just one, has posted his own work. Those interested can read such more current work, along with, of course, the old school stuff of Mr. Spraycan's ilk as they so desire.
The BDSM Library is an excellent site despite the fact that it accepts my efforts. This has never been an issue as far as I know. However I must take exception to your rather imperious comments concerning an excellent writer whose body of work has stood the test of time.
The operative word here being "imperious" which The Oxford English Dictionary, 2nd Edition, defines as..."having the rank of, or belonging to or befitting an emperor or supreme ruler."Quote:
I must take exception to your rather imperious comments
Hey! Thanks for the promotion. Despite serving honorably in the air farce, sorry, force I never achieved the rank of emperor or supreme ruler. Of course, that assumes that lex ludite's "your" meant moi.
Okay. I'll assume it does and accept the laurels or scrambled eggs or whatever.
Other dictionaries, as this self-proclaimed veteran writer surely must know, say much the same thing about "imperious". Some even go on to explain that it can also mean exercising a commanding influence, dominant; having a commanding position, aspect, demeanor, etc. Plus the O.E.D. rattles on about things like majesty and stateliness, etc.
So much so, it makes even this "emperor" blush.
There's also in the big books words like..."dunce" and especially appropo here "dunceDOM", but I like "imperious" the best.
Webster's New World Dictionary also defines the word to mean "overbearing, arrogant," which is more in keeping with your behavior these days.
According to WordWeb (which I would again like to thank the person who recommended it to me) it means:
Able to deal authoritatively with affairs
It also recommended Domineering.
And now I would like to close with the following words: Now, now children, play nice.
Being older than dirt does not make one necessarily mature, as Lord Douche's admonishment makes one feel as though he is back in 2nd grade. Must say, though, that age regressing and feeling oh so juvenile is far more palatable than being on the business end of lex ludite's patronizing tone (and yes, lex, if one can read read...there are several definitions that frequently pop up behind certain words in various dictionaries).
Faibhar mate, I was in the AF too--is that what twisted us?
Wayward Wife's Punishment by Lex Ludite
That is a good question, so I'll revive the thread.
It is difficult to choose, as many of the books in BDSM Library have given me exquisite cums. They make up a substantial part of my 'for-keeps' collection.
Power One definitely is a favourite. Yet quite unequal, and when in collaboration I tend to like him least. I know I cannot read 'Rebecca Strip Searched' to the end without collapsing, so I usually open it at a random page. I found that illustrating it with plates by Boris Lopez made it even more powerful, as Rebecca, in his original writing, is a very young girl with a well developed body, and that is what Lopez draws. (Power One told me h'd later changed her age to accommodate more heavily censored sites). Airport Strip Search shares similar settings yet differs much in approach and characters; a proof of PO's skill. What a pity he cannot bring himself to finish a book - except for RSS.
A recent addition which got me flowing like an old faucet was Black Star's 'Rome'. Snuff is not my cup of tea - I'm not yet fully associating Eros and Thanatos, even though I understand it's pretty commonplace - but this book illustrates the advantage of the genre: prior to termination, anything goes, since there's nothing to lose, and a gifted slut can still have some nice cums on the scaffold or the arena - she could not care less about her reputation! The execution itself is mercifully swift (its description is, I mean) and the book's erotic charge comes from the culprit's consciousness stream as her fate and that of her family are explained to her in great detail.
It is unfortunate the online version is completely garbled and to be frank, unreadable. I was able to coax an orderly version from Black Star. He certainly should send it to Jinn!
I am a big fan of Llabmik's nasty humour. I laugh and seep every time I read him. He was gracious enough to give me a cameo appearance in Hamburg Snuff. What a pity this book is still unfinished!
And (to balance the idea that I favour gory fun, which is only partly true) I must salute Y.N. Humiliator (The Continuing Adventures of Lisa James) for his oh so naughty imagination.
(I think the big secret is the mix of naughtiness and nastiness. A book with only one ingredient is plain boring. And properly whipping the two into a froth is each author's trademark.)
So many thanks to Jinn for what is truly a public service. There is much I don't like on the site, but that is the case for everybody, and as long as I can plunder the gems, why should I care?
I have a collection of his work that I downloaded from one of the old Newsgroups around 1996/97.
If anyone wants to read a selection, send me a pm or email and I will try to oblige.
Drayman
My two cents on the issue of reviews and marks.
I have found that I pay no attention to the grade of a story. '9/10, one vote' does not carry the day for me.
Also the very idea of reviewing/voting is a chore. We're in this for pleasure (well, pain, too). Don't bash me (or rather, do, please). I'm just enunciating fact. Very few people log on a BDSM site with dedication and the public good foremost in their minds.
However, on reading a story I may feel the need to convey emotions in my own words, to be scathing or effusive, sarcastic or obscene, whatever. The 'review-vote' format is not quite the right one for that because it's a no-feedback, fire and forget thing. Come on guys, you don't want the New Yorker literary review; you want gut feedback from us perverts, us perverts like feedback from you and each other, and there's nothing perverts like better than a good pillow fight or flame war on a topic they like. (well, OK, there are things I like better).
Suggestion: why not open the 'story feedback' forum (or a sub-forum of it) to the non-registered to post in, with a very skimpy set of rules of engagement. (Threads would be story- or author- centered).
We could see what happens.
Believe it or not there are a few of us who do believe in helping, or hindering in some cases, authors who post on the site. However speaking as an author, rather than a reviewer, I heartily endorse the idea you have put forward. Feedback is one thing that most authors strive mightly to obtain, be it good or bad. Personally there are times when the rating system drives me up the wall, because it has turned into a crutch for many and a burden for others. The idea of a visceral reaction, rather than some overly serious analysis of one's work would be a useful adjunct to the current system. Another advantage that would accrue, especially to the writer who submits his or her work piecemeal, would be a somewhat constant, real time feedback to his or her story as it takes its many twists and turns. Usually what occurs is that three, four, or more reviews are posted and everyone else hunkers down and remains clamlike, even though the story may take many, many months to unfold.
Why should reviewing/voting be a chore? Why can you not "convey your emotions in your own words", as you say, in the review? Writers DO want to hear your gut reaction, and if you write something interesting or provocative, most writers, I think, will respond, either publicly or privately. I would agree that just selecting a '7' or an '8' or whatever may leave you feeling rather unfulfilled, but the review box is open-ended. You can say as much or as little as you want. And, if you feel that you have been overly scathing, effusive, or obscene you can always edit the review later.Quote:
Originally posted by jeanne
My two cents on the issue of reviews and marks.
Also the very idea of reviewing/voting is a chore. We're in this for pleasure (well, pain, too). Don't bash me (or rather, do, please). I'm just enunciating fact. Very few people log on a BDSM site with dedication and the public good foremost in their minds.
However, on reading a story I may feel the need to convey emotions in my own words, to be scathing or effusive, sarcastic or obscene, whatever. The 'review-vote' format is not quite the right one for that because it's a no-feedback, fire and forget thing.
I don't think there's anything wrong with the reviewing format , I just wish that more readers would take the minute or two (or thirty, if they wish) to let us ink-stained wretches know how we're doing.
I believe that it was Marcus who suggested the ten phrases that accompany the numbers 1-10 in the rating system. For the most part I find them very helpful as a general guideline. But they're not the Ten Commandments. If you think a story deserves 8 pts on a scale of 10, give it an 8, regardless of whether the text that accompanies an '8' rating is an exact reflection of your sentiments. You can always explain your reasons more fully in the review box.
Seriously, I think that when most authors get the system e-mail that tells them "Madame X has just reviewed your story" their pulse rate speeds up a little. It's not quite Christmas morning, but it's close. Sometimes when we unwrap the 'gift' {i.e. see the rating} we're a little (or a lot) disappointed, but when that happens we can all comfort ourselves with the old saying that "it's the thought that counts". At least the reviewer bothered to take the time to let us know that he or she had read the story into which we put a lot of effort. 99.9% of the readers do not take the time to do that. We really do treasure that one/tenth of one percent (if that) who do.
Boccaccio
I lliked "Molly". Too violent for reality, but since this is all fantasy, why not?
'I don't think there's anything wrong with the reviewing format , I just wish that more readers would take the minute or two (or thirty, if they wish) to let us ink-stained wretches know how we're doing.'
OK. I get the rebuke. Will you please extend your boot, so I can lick it clean.
(I'm not being sarcastic or, God forbid, insolent. Merely enjoying the situation).
One question: in the present system, are reviews available for perusal?
One suggestion: As one can only have a valid opinion on a story hours, days or weeks after having DLed it, accessing it again can be an (additional)
(for some reason the thing posted WHILE I was typing... Bugs bugs, where is Llabmik when he is needed!)
... accessing the story again can be a pain.
Why not put a review template in TXT or Word or XLS format on the homepage. People could DL it, review any number of stories at leisure, then email the forms to a dedicated email box. Parsing for results would be automated, and individual reviews would be made available for browsing.
Sorry for the mistake.
Not to worry. If it ever happens again, just hit the edit button (second from right at bottom of each post), and pick up where you left off.
My favorate is the two stories by James Wilson A new life for tracy and A new slave for tracy but the author stopped writing them and I have been waiting for a long time to see if he will start up again. Does any one know what happened to him
Probably couldn't decide how to finish, it's a trap. :cool:Quote:
Originally Posted by john964
Never post until the story is complet is my rule. :cool:
my best story is "owned teacher". I think it should be completed by someone
All in all, the story I keep coming back to is a little FF MC story called 'Itty Bitty' on MCSTORIES.COM (at http://www.mcstories.com/IttyBitty/index.html)
It concerns a young lady who is somehow reduced to a chaste mouth-slave by a an old (female) classmate. The sense of helplessness is really something.
Not nearly hard-core enough for you real BDSMers, but for me it works.
Well, since we already have a favorite movie thread, it seems logical that we extent the logic to bdsm stories, and author in bdsmlibrary.com.
Merged this into a similar thread already in progress. Have fun!
Dammit. Still haven't seen any of MY stories mentioned. Oh well :D
Stephonies new life.
I will always read any update that the author puts up. Hasnt been any updates for quite a while (hello out there )
I've got to go with A Slave to Politics by SpeechMasterOne. Just a wonderful blackmail story, with wonderfully imagined scenes and settings.
Like others, I really appreciate the efforts of all the writers who post their stories. My favourite stories are F/m and as such I guess I am very much in a minority. I used to like the Femdom/ malesub stories of Victor Bruno, but these have long since disappeared.
I have been enjoying the Jane Marwood chapters. They are really well written but they are not updated very regularly which is really frustrating.
I would like to find more well-written stories, but have yet to find any site where the content matches this one.
Hi FERNAKKAPAN,Quote:
Originally Posted by fernakkapan
Victor Bruno died.. more's the pity.
I think Jane Marwood is a nom de plume. I've a book: "Harriet Marwood, Governes", by HARVEY POOLIDGE. Unfortunately it is only a German translation (ISBN: 3-453-50218-3)
It is a famous classsical femdom novel (237 p.) from the 19th century. The story is set in England the very strict governes Marwood teaches juvenil Richard manners.
I think Jane has read this book and she is rather taken with the Marwood's name.
By the way she has written a new novel about Richard (may be read total in BDSM Cafe, gratis).
But Poolidge's story is completely different merely the two names Richard and Marwood are the same.
pet10
No question, Powerone. Your writing is excellent. I do enjoy Cortez as well: vivid descriptions and well-deleniated characters. His series of related stories piqued my interest in him; I rushed to read everything else he wrote.Quote:
Originally Posted by Powerone
Good stuffl
I was trawling through threads on forum and came across your post. I went and read both above and I absolutely adored Modern Mid-Wife """""". Thanks for recommendation it was brill.Quote:
Originally Posted by redEva
I have a personal saying....Want to cum, read Powerone....lol......Love anything he has done so far....anxiously awaiting more chapters for "The Village of Agony and Ecstasy"
pamela is another of my favorite authors.....in particular "The Wonderful Brassiere" and "Two For Torment".....I do wish she would post stories more often.....her story "Simon Says" really touched me at a gut level on how much we can give away to another that we can never get back
Ms. Which has a story called "Ana And Her Father"...I'm not into incest really but I loved chapter VI of that story
I also do like the story other's have mentioned "Raider's Dungeon".....mainly because Raider sounds like a hottie and a half of a Dom...but I'm not sure off the top of my head who wrote it...sorry to the author on that!
I like some of the stories by Kallie Thomas too....funny that...I'm not into snuff but her writing just grabs me for some reason
Even though the story wasn't finished, I also really liked what was posted of "Punk Rock Girl" by GaryWilcox
These are a few of my favorites.....I'm going to check out some of the ones others have posted here.....always glad to have a recommendation as my reading tastes really vary at times....Hmmmm, now who is this Cortez person anyway? :D
~~nibbles~~
My favorite story at this moment has to be Slave Daughter by Argus. Sadly it is an Ebook From bdsmbooks.com.
I would love to share it with all of you but it is copy righted and TG would kick my ass if I posted it.
I also Love Power one he's is very good.
Generally anything concerning Incest BDSM F/f will get my interest. I have read so many story's that I have gotten a little jaded. But when some thing new and different comes alone it will keep me going for some time.
The last one that had my attention was Clairs menagerie by Orion part 1 and 2 with illustrations by benson
also Mom Pet forget the author. They are both on the petgirls site. Sorry now that I am back to work. I have an extra 50 bucks and I put it to good use by subscribing to Petgirls and fucking machines. The later was a big mistake because it is extremely boring. How many times can you watch the same machine in the same position over and over again. I will not renew. But to get my moneys worth I will suck them dry of all content just like I did to waterbondage.
You know...as much as it made me wanna cry when I read it ('cause I was playing emo in the back ground), but the Perils of Pauline at Christmas. You just can't read that story and not think 'that poor damn kid...'
Edit:Also, my fave authors are Lilttred and Powerone
The Poker Party is my favorite story. It's totally my fantasy to serve many men at a time. I love the way the girl was kept under the table to suck cocks during the party. I also love the humiliation of piss and shit. I don't really like the idea of eating shit, but the idea of being shit on or licking a man's ass turns me on. It's hard to find stories or movies of this nature where the man is the DOM. Likewise with foot worship stories. They're generally only about a man worshiping a woman's feet.
Tracy in Trouble is actually one of the first stories I read. I loved it, and even looked it up to share with a boyfriend a year or two later.Quote:
Originally Posted by BDSM_Tourguide