Loved it. Very real, moving and well-written as well as incredibly hot.
Definitely one to share with D. :)
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Loved it. Very real, moving and well-written as well as incredibly hot.
Definitely one to share with D. :)
Exquisite.
Not nearly enough, but my thanks for sharing.
tessa
Would you consider going on with this. I for one would love to read many more chapters of your writing technique.
Thank you for this though.
Oz, now her punishment is over, how about tasking her to write to some more chapters?
cariad
For that she would need to get her Master's permission. As I said, it was a unique, one-time, guest punishment, situation...
But I'm sure she's reading all your comments... and I hereby volunteer to post anything she sends me...
...of course I would be first in line to applaud if she posted a new installment herself... so she could acquire the accolades directly.
[QUOTE=cookiecat;184500]the whole story was hot but this........... sighs......[/QUOTE
Cookie you quote is right on except for the part about this story being hot. For me it is about as hot as watching paint dry.
[QUOTE=Charlie Brown 169;200557]LMAO. Not only are your grapes sour... they're the wrong variety... :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by cookiecat
Thank goodness there are lots of varieties of grapes - means we can all find types we enjoy somewhere.
cariad
Could become a novelette?
i really liked ur storyy!
Add toys and chapters and you will become famous!