Praise, Comments, or Suggestions for the New Lord Mobius's Dungeon

0_o Boy scenes...! ::wicked grin:: I'm not into that personally, but I'd kinda like to see it for some reason... lol. Maybe I'm just in a strange mood. :help:

Came home from work early today with a blinding headache, so I doubt I'll post in the dungeon tonight. I'm certainly reading though. Heh.

You've put a lot of thought into your 'character' Jade, very well done. (I, too, hope it's not personal experience). Personally I've been playing it by ear and winging it since the start... lmao.

Heehee, the next time I post in the dungeon I might stir things up a little if that's ok... just thinking and plotting. ;)

Right now I have no thoughts on the dungeon being split, or not... my brain just won't work on that tonight. Up to you guys, is all it's telling me.

I did say that the dungeon is open to all. And I mean that. How ever as a self discribed flaming hetero and possible homophobe. If there are some male subs that want to play in the dungeon with there female partners or male for that matter.

Be advised that I have a wizard in my back pocket and I am not afried to use him. The male sub that ventures to near to Lord mobus's comfort zone may find them selves transgenderd on the spot. Fictionaly speaking of course.

but if they want to play in the dungeon that is ok with me just leave mobius out of the story lines. But other than that go ahead and write all you want. The dungeon is open to all life styles gay or strieght

Lord Mobius

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Originally Posted by Mobius

Be advised that I have a wizard in my back pocket and I am not afried to use him.

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ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by Mobius

Well were to start. Jade I hope all that your "charicter" has endured Is fiction and has not happened in real life. While we all have our demons and pain in our lives I fear that the ones your "charicter" has endured may be a little to real to dally with.

Please let us know if your trama is real or stuff of fantasy. I dont want your charictor going bezerk in the dungeon and taking a pichford to one of the masters or staking a vampire.

Respectfully yours
Moby

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There are similarities between my character Jade and myself. Please be aware that my family is safe and sound. I want you all to understand that while abuse can follow a person through their whole life. It has not in my case. While I will never forget what happened it is not something that haunts me. It is something that happened but it is in the past. I have read about the difference between humiliation and degradation. I have also read about the differences in a healthy BDSM relationship and abuse. I am here to learn and explore my needs. I promise not to go postal in the dungeon and hurt someone unless of course that is what he or she want me to do. My only issues are no hitting, punching, kicking or cutting. I have not seen any of that but it would not be something I would enjoy. As Jade learns her needs and limits so will I. Remember she is a feisty one on occasion. Thank you for having a safe place for me to experiment.

P.S. I will kick anyone’s ass who tries to take over my mind. :p

Sincerely, Jade

What you propose is fine my only concirn is there are some of us in the dungeon and out that like to fantasies about rape incest etc. You have experianced the negitive side of those things. Not that there is any positive things about them either. It is after all fantasy. I do hope no one takes what ever happens to seriusly. I am concerned that a story line may verge to close to your experiance and upset you.

Do we need to have coution when we play with jade

Mobius

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... I do hope no one takes what ever happens to seriusly. I am concerned that a story line may verge to close to your experiance and upset you.

Do we need to have coution when we play with jade

Mobius

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Yes, we do and should. Behind the scenes I do a lot of PMing to help move our storylines along. Sair, Myya and BabySub have all sent us approvals or suggestions before we do something too naughty to their characters.

Based on where Jade's "character" is coming from, it would be best to follow that trend or use her character as an observer rather than a playmate. If she wants to join in the fun, she can give us strong clues:

"Gee, that looks like fun," Jade thought. "Do me next," she begged aloud.
Just let Jade and a few of our more hesistant or newer residents/visitors take the lead before you drop them into a scene.

For example - I was once very shy in the dungeon and asked Lord Mobius to help me lose weight. He came up with the best picture and exercises, my hubby and I loved it. Then I got braver and well, was promoted to Mistress...
have I said thanks lately Lord Mobius.

This girl might need a reminder that she is happy to serve as well as play the mistress. ;)

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Originally Posted by Mobius

What you propose is fine my only concirn is there are some of us in the dungeon and out that like to fantasies about rape incest etc. You have experianced the negitive side of those things. Not that there is any positive things about them either. It is after all fantasy. I do hope no one takes what ever happens to seriusly. I am concerned that a story line may verge to close to your experiance and upset you.

Do we need to have coution when we play with jade

Mobius

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I am over whelmed at the concern and respect that everyone is showing me on a personal level. But please no not feel you have to walk on eggshells around me. I am not a fragile flower. I have been reading many post and I am aware of people’s fantasies.

I myself have rape fantasies, among my other fantasies. ;) As far as the incest is concerned just as long as children are not involved I do not have a problem with it. Do I want to be gang banged on my first few visits to the dungeon probably not but I will want it sooner or later. More likely sooner. The reason I am here is so I can play out these fantasies.

I am learning to be submissive and so far I have been successful and this is in real life. This is play it is not real and I do understand that. I do not want everyone to feel they have to censor what they do because it might upset me. Is the Jade character as submissive as me probably not but she has just started her fantasy with her new playmates where as I have already begun.

If something happens to the Jade character that she doesn’t like she will get over it. She will express her dislike and move on to the next adventure.

Your concern for my well being is heart warming Sir and I feel it reflects a true dominant’s concern for those he watches over. If you see a blonde day in my future please let me know Sir and I will dye my hair. :whip2:

[Quote/Jadetiger]I am over whelmed at the concern and respect that everyone is showing me on a personal level. But please no not feel you have to walk on eggshells around me. I am not a fragile flower. I have been reading many post and I am aware of people’s fantasies.
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Your concern for my well being is heart warming Sir and I feel it reflects a true dominant’s concern for those he watches over. If you see a blonde day in my future please let me know Sir and I will dye my hair. :whip2:[/QUOTE]


Actually..... you don't have to worry about that: all new arrivals are, uh, i guess you could say "scared blonde" during their orientation. Our resident medical expert, Lady Dee, shows you the video through virtual video, and it makes the blondification complete. Our minion "A" takes care of all deforestation (e.g. shaving...) from neck down. It, like the blondification, is fictionally permanent.

Any other concerns?

Lord Chksng19

Not the video. Jade shudders. :help:

can I ask for wardrobe here?

This is just getting better and better.

Lord Mobius, you know how I keep everything so clean here, can
I not have one of those wonderful French Maid outfits too!!!

And you have struck a chord with us corset lovers! and wearers...
one of those also, just like in your French Maid outfit for Jade.

French maids, Vampires, space aliens
why we are getting the whole spectrum of species in here, horror
and otherwise!

Tantalizing!

Jenny
White Collar

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Originally Posted by jenny

can I ask for wardrobe here?

This is just getting better and better.

Lord Mobius, you know how I keep everything so clean here, can
I not have one of those wonderful French Maid outfits too!!!

And you have struck a chord with us corset lovers! and wearers...
one of those also, just like in your French Maid outfit for Jade.

French maids, Vampires, space aliens
why we are getting the whole spectrum of species in here, horror
and otherwise!

Tantalizing!


Jenny
White Collar

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Would you like the same rights and previlages as jade?
We could have a pair of french maids matching in every thing and always working together?

question,

I think it has already happened in dungeon, does't matter, as long
as the I get the French Maid outfit and the corset, it's the corset
that makes the outfit.

Also, I still wear a white collar, so if that fits in with any privileges
then, that is fine.

AND GOOD GOING RUBY!!!

My dinner actually had the real test for a vampire. You know your
stuff!

Although the garlic and stakes and drinking a fake blood may have
many thinking that would weed out the real vampires, few
know to actually watch for NO EATING. Vampires don't eat, and
the touch of where they pretend to eat: Fascinating.

There really are real vampires in the dungeon...

Jenny
white collar

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question,

AND GOOD GOING RUBY!!!

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Jenny --
And the same back to you. Well done. I think your antics with the vampires are delightful. And I know two of them would like to take you over their knee for forcing them to smell that much garlic. Pee-ewe! (Or however that's spelled.)

You have discovered the reason why so many people believe Lyssa's children to be legend; they can bypass so many of the "usual" vampire detection methods. Yet make no mistake, they can be just as deadly.

Your little cross won't save you from that spanking, but best keep it on in case Myra or Dracubus return.

Speaking of which - I'm not in any hurry to rescue BabySub. Is anyone else? That girl is on fire!

Jade, Lord's Chuck and Mobius, all the new writers, thanks for joining team.
I eagerly await your next surprise. Wasn't that virgin just outrageous!
A good thing that Lord Mobius, put on a few restrictions. Whew!

I would be honored to help find Babysub when she is ready. I do believe sizzling is a better description.

P.S.
I really do need to get the things I lose on the road and access to a computer.

*pant* Wow! Babysub that was incredible!

Whenever you want to be rescued, just say the word. I'm all geared up for a fight with Drac/Myra. Especially Myra, she made me have such naughty dreams ;) And conviently my little friend Eremon the dingbat can trace back to Mildar and bring us right to you.

Just say the word my dear! I may not be a knight... or male... but I do have shiny armor :p

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I really do need to get the things I lose on the road and access to a computer.

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Just write in a bit where you ask Lord Chuck to send the minions out for them. You don't think he wants you to leave the dungeon, do you?
Tell him what you need and ask nicely. He won't bite.

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Originally Posted by Myya

*pant* Wow! Babysub that was incredible!

Whenever you want to be rescued, just say the word. I'm all geared up for a fight with Drac/Myra. Especially Myra, she made me have such naughty dreams ;) And conviently my little friend Eremon the dingbat can trace back to Mildar and bring us right to you.

Just say the word my dear! I may not be a knight... or male... but I do have shiny armor :p

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Excuse me for the interjection, but aren't all "dingbats" named "Zapf"?

Pardon an old, old, old computer guy's interruption.

Chuck

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Excuse me for the interjection, but aren't all "dingbats" named "Zapf"?

Pardon an old, old, old computer guy's interruption.

Chuck

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lol, nice! I actually had to look that one up before I got it though :p

These "dingbats" are minature flying dragons though, so you can name them anything you want :)

Wow, thanks for the comments guys! It's really nice to hear that you're enjoying it. Those last posts from me were kind of 'spur of the moment', and I just went for it. ::grin:: That Roberts pic inspired them big time, and will do others too, I have no doubt.

Jade & Myya... when I want to be rescued, I would be honoured for you two to come to my aid. ;) My heroines... heh. I'd have to thank you both of course. Any suggestions for that..? lol.

No posts in the dungeon from me tonight, way too tired. I should be back in full force tomorrow however.. so until then, KEEP POSTING! I'm still reading and enjoying, if nothing else.

I hope nobody minds my little plot twist and I do apologise if it means that I have put some of the other writers out by causing them to change there pieces.
I'm also not in any rush to rescue babysub (I’m enjoying her writing to much) so I wont be waking from my coma any time soon (unless babysub wants rescuing PM me if you do!).

I feel that there is too much fun to be had taking advantage of a completely helpless and speechless slave he he :p

If any of you guys want to become involved in some of the erotic dreams I’m going to have which btw have even less limits (they are dreams after all!)
Then just let me know or even spin of a fantasy of your own

Regards,
Littleslut

Hello A/all,

Wow! This is Fun. Things are going so wild here. BabySub, Praises from me too, loved reading you. Little slut, nice diversion. :)

Looking forward to read more,

AconitE.

Lord Mobius -
Just wanted to say thanks for the creative punishment.
I'm still finding sand in places where it shouldn't be.

Jadetiger & BabySub & LittleSlut -
Thanks so much for making these last few days enjoyable.
Very hot posts. Definate - grab your partner/vibe material!

Lady AconitE -
Loved the scene where you played with your boy.
Great picture to go with it. I do hope you end up sharing him.

Everyone -
You've all made this dungeon such a fun place to play, read, and write.
I think our behind the scenes coordination is getting better, too.

Am looking forward to finding out what happens next!
Keep up the great "work",

Ruby

Babysub my heart was pounding in my chest when I finished your story.

I want to say I am enjoying all the storylines in the dungeon. You guys really know how to keep everyone sitting on the edge of their sits. :)

New here but I must say just looking over the course of the thread at various intervals I was quite impressed by all involved, you all deserve a good round of applause. I really can’t wait to read the whole thing.

Oh wow i have been away for such a LONG time :o Would anyone be able to update me on what has been happening the dungeon in a nutshell. Thanks to all!

Hey all....

BabySub would now really, really like to be rescued.

Please.

Thanks.

;)

would be more of an update on what HASN'T happened in the dungeon!!!

It takes me hours just to catch up after a weekend!

I had a great idea: can we have a dungeon betrothal? Doesn't that just
sound horrifying!!!

Wouldn't that be exciting, imagine the outfits (Lord Mobius you do a great
job with those corset details, mmmm love wearing mine!) and the food
(it would take weeks to plan and prepare for those that can, uh, eat!),
decorations (cobwebs galore).

But who would be the lucky couple or even couples or being bdsm how
bout who would be the lucky threesome?

Jenny
white collar

be "in a nutshell" guides each week, or maybe even (for me) a
flow chart, especially for the sex! Or sex nutshells for those
that just want only that!

This is reallly such great reading, and to keep up does take hours,
if someone misses a few weeks, they almost cannot catch up.

We do have a lot of things going on and many many creative writers,
the dungeon really is an exciting place!

Jenny
White Collar

Jade trembles as she post her new collar color.

Black - anything goes except torture and humilation

Purple - for those of us who look better in purple, but like the meaning of black - anything goes except torture and humilation

hey Chksng19 and Lord Mobius would you help me do a gang rape on Aachicka in you rdungeon if I can write it in it is her fantasy so I was wondreing if I could count on you guys to help me out please let me know so Ican start to write it

If that is her wish I do not have a problem with it

How many people does she want to service?

We do have snap on tools in the dungeon I am sure some of the woman would not mind helping out also

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hey Chksng19 and Lord Mobius would you help me do a gang rape on Aachicka in you rdungeon if I can write it in it is her fantasy so I was wondreing if I could count on you guys to help me out please let me know so Ican start to write it

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Be more than happy to help: give us a date so we're not in the middle of something else. Also, please have her post her own approval of it, as Mobius said we don't want to do this if she doesn't.

Chksng19

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Be more than happy to help: give us a date so we're not in the middle of something else. Also, please have her post her own approval of it, as Mobius said we don't want to do this if she doesn't.

Chksng19

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hello, um..yes that is my fantasy, so it's ok then Sir?

Sorry about the scarcity of my prolific posting

It is the whole unemployed thing. Trying to find work is taking time
Sorry

It will get better when I am back at work

Aachicka,

About your fantasy ... how's it going?

Just right? Too much? Do you want any control at all or to let us decide what to do?

If you have a moment, please tell us what you liked and didn't. What kind of action would you like to see next.

If you want to write about it here, go for it. If you want a bigger challenge, write a "short story" about how you were feeling in the dungeon.

Please help us help you.

All,

Who has number two? A guest, a slave, a sub, another mistress? I'm looking forward to someone jumping in.

MasterMike - are you so revved, that you're going to claim the number two spot? What would you like to see happen next?

Remember - dungeon time is virtual - so this can last for a week.

Have fun and enjoy. Blessed be,

Ruby

Lord Mobius is going to reposition the slave onto the rape ometer.

but will still wait until turn number 5

Ps I have my licence back and am much releaved.

I took care of number 2; she may need a break after doing 45 football players.

Congrats on the license renewal, Mobius. I'm sure that brings a sigh of relief for you. Darn glad to hear that.

She's back on stage, waiting for whoever is number 3.

Chksng

I am having the Jade entertain the alian for a bit
he was getting lonely and started to sulk. There is nothing worse than a sulking alian.
It is friday and that is a big sci fi night with enterprize and then all the stargate shows and of course battle stargalactica so I will not be on until late tonight.

My cat's and I are geeking it up watching all my favorite shows.

So continue the raping with out me for a bit more

Mobius :)

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I am having the Jade entertain the alian for a bit
he was getting lonely and started to sulk. There is nothing worse than a sulking alian.
It is friday and that is a big sci fi night with enterprize and then all the stargate shows and of course battle stargalactica so I will not be on until late tonight.

My cat's and I are geeking it up watching all my favorite shows.

So continue the raping with out me for a bit more

Mobius :)

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Evil Sir, very evil. Jade goes and looks up the word torture. Yep that's what I thought. I will refrain from frying the alien's brain for him and endure the torture just for you Lord Mobius. :D

One man's torture is another's man's fun and games. :p

Jade wonders if she can come up with a response without killing the cute little alien character. ;)

You were just dieing to use the twins weren't you. :rolleyes:

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Originally Posted by Jadetiger

Evil Sir, very evil. Jade goes and looks up the word torture. Yep that's what I thought. I will refrain from frying the alien's brain for him and endure the torture just for you Lord Mobius. :D

One man's torture is another's man's fun and games. :p

Jade wonders if she can come up with a response without killing the cute little alien character. ;)

You were just dieing to use the twins weren't you. :rolleyes:

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No criticism intended, Jade my dear, but which planet are you really from?
Some of your commentary could cause confusion among our Non-English-as-a-native-tongue readers.