Ok, so i was forced (Doms can do such things )to upload my first story and am completely unsure if it's worth reading or not, whether the wording is ok (my mother tongue is German but for various reasons i have to write them in english) and all that.
I would be very grateful for every review. Oh, and i vowed to write at least 5 reviews for every story i upload, so it's kinda quid pro quo.

Oops, almost forgot the link: The beginning of her journey

Edit: Ooops again, i think it's in the wrong section. But since both feedback and reviews are most welcome it doesnt really matter.

Thank you in advance