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    And quotes?

    OK I have a story up, which for large chunks, is a single character telling a story.
    With me so far?
    Now the question is, if the man speaks for a few paragraphs uninterrupted does the entire body of that speech remain within a single set of quotes or do I use new quotes each time he breaks into a new paragraph?
    Style books seem unclear to me on this point and I'm unsure which is least confusing for the reader.
    Opinions and reasoned discussion would be welcome though I'll try to avoid this formate in the future
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    This is different in different languages, and perhaps also in different varieties of English (Brit/American English) Often you get to see a quotation mark at the opening of every new paragraph but endquote only at the very end, like this:

    "You bastard,
    "I never thought you'd deceive me like this, what a trickster you are!
    "Have you been writing this for a long time?"

    This is common in French too. But often it works fine to just put a " at the opening of the quote and another at the end, no matter how long the quoted statement is.

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    Hi Mad,

    If one person is speaking, telling a story, giving a lecture, etc. for a number of paragraphs in a row, then here's how Penguin publishing does it.

    Open the first paragraph with quotation marks

    "blah, blah, blah

    Do not put a closing set of quotation marks at the end of the paragraph, but do indent (or skip a line) and put another opening set on each paragraph that continues. Use a closing set of quotation marks to end the paragraphs and help the reader with a close. Within the text, if the story teller is quoting someone else, use ' marks. Like this:

    "blah, blah, blah

    "more blah, blah, blah

    "even more blah, blah, blah

    "lots of story telling, blah, blah, blah -- with a singe 'like this,' she said -- within the big quote

    "and finally wrapping up," he said with a smile.


    For an example, check out Anne Rice's The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty, in the section where Prince Alexi tells his story to Beauty.

    My recommendation, be consistent throughout the story. If you are planning on submitting it to a publishing house, you may want to check their style guides first.

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    Goes with the opening quote for everyparagraph crowwd. this is what I learned way back when, and seems like the simplest way to me. Though I do recall seeing this type of thing set off with an additional indentation like this:
    Jim settled in and began to tell his story,
    blah blah blah
    more blah
    even more blah
    I am not surwe if that is acceptable or not, but it is an alternative.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rhabbi View Post
    Though I do recall seeing this type of thing set off with an additional indentation like this:
    Jim settled in and began to tell his story,
    blah blah blah
    more blah
    even more blah
    I am not surwe if that is acceptable or not, but it is an alternative.
    Many publishers tend to skip the additional indentation for printed books to keep the page numbers down.

    Others will put the "story" within the story in italics.
    For me, the italics are hard to read.

    I like the idea of clearly kicking off that one character is going to be speaking for awhile.

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    I personally prefer either the indent, the italics, or something along that line to unmatched opening quotes at the beginning of every paragraph. Maybe it's just the software engineer in me, but damn it all those opening quotes are going to throw a TON of syntax errors in the compiler

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    Quote Originally Posted by Austerus View Post
    I personally prefer either the indent, the italics, or something along that line to unmatched opening quotes at the beginning of every paragraph. Maybe it's just the software engineer in me, but damn it all those opening quotes are going to throw a TON of syntax errors in the compiler
    I sorta feel the same, but there seems to be a consensus toward the unmatched quote version and when in Rome....

    I guess I'll repair it along those lines and see if Rabbit will upload and updateed version.
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    I read your story and didn't have any issues with the quote marks. Must have been the fantastic story that distracted me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tessa View Post
    I read your story and didn't have any issues with the quote marks. Must have been the fantastic story that distracted me.

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    Yours
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    Since I don't have to give up my grammar...

    Naw your just sweet on Lews.
    Despite the quaintness of all things "Naw", it should still be held accountable to the rules and followed up with a comma. Another item to mention- the word in bold should be spelled in it's contraction form- "you're".
    You should know he's easy tessa, so you don't have to give up your grammar for him.
    There should be a comma after "easy". (And I do know that about Lews, by the way. It's what makes him so loveable. Besides, takes one easy to know one.)

    But he appreciates it anyway
    This sentence is missing the ending punctuation. Additionally, it's not the best idea to begin a sentence with the word 'but'. You can do much with 'but', however it's not the best thing with which to lead. And I would know.

    Yours
    Mad
    If you are following the American English guidelines, then there should be some type of punctuation after "Yours", preferably a comma. If you are following the British version of the English language, then no marks are certainly acceptable. Me? I prefer the marks myself.

    Well, what about that. It really is better to give than to receive.

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