Prepared for a Master...

[Domination King]

This is a story I've just been dabbling with here and there. The premise is about a mysterious exchange. There's actually a plot to this one, though I'm not sure if it's respectable or not. The idea behind it is that a King has been preparing his only daughter to be the slave for a noblemen. He has been punishing his daughter with whips and chains, as well as making her humiliate herself by servicing him at the appointed times. She is to be ready to marry in a few days (when the story starts). It all goes back to a wager made between the noblemen and the king. There's a plot twist in there somehwere (at least in my head) which will reveal a hidden secret. I don't want to give too much away, so forgive me for beign vauge. Let's just say the ending will prove how far one man will go to keep a secret. The girl in it, I'm sad to say is just a pawn in the game, but it makes for quite an erotic tale. Let me know what you think, all comments and constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks.

Domination King
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[GaryWilcox]

I'd say that's got a lot of what a sexy story needs...

Write, dammit!

[truckinnhorsin]

sounds like a good story plan to me!! lets see it....

[Ruby]

The girl in it, I'm sad to say is just a pawn in the game, but it makes for quite an erotic tale.

It sounds great. Write away! And perhaps for the romantics, the girl can find a bit of love for her master and him for her.

Sounds quite yummy if you can avoid the king doing his daughter.

[Caitlin]

I'll look forward to reading it, Domination King. It has great scope for not only the main plot. but for sub-plots as well, and character creativity. Go with it. - Caitlin.

[Puss]

Sounds exciting... can't stop now... hanging for the next part... caught hook line and sinker...

[Domination King]

Thanks for the rave reviews for a potential story. I'm not sure I'll be able to finish anything of the sort though. Unfortuantely my hands are tied at the moment and I'm not in the position to just sit down and write. If someone wants to take a stab at it let me know, and I'll give you what I have already.

Thanks

Domination King

[j]

Sounds like a fine idea! As long as you don't forget to ALSO go on with that fine delirious tale you've been regaling us with, 'Pirate's life'! Authors leaving unfinished books are the bane of the genre, and it riles when the authors are the promising and delicious kind!