I think we all have to accept that among the thousands of readers out there, particular kinds of story click with different groups. There are rare cases of stories that cross boundaries, because of their ideas, or the way they are presented. We cannot expect everybody to like what we write. If a few are complimentary, you have done well.

Stories that particularly appeal to me are usually consensual, sympathetic towards the female role and unmistakeably fantasy. The more it sounds like something that could really have happened, as a rule, the less I like it, unless it is entirely consensual and described exceptionally well.

I did read your story 'Gone' and I can't honestly say that anything in it seemed at all erotic to me. It read too much like a factual account, and there was too little of the kind of descriptive detail that might have stimulated my overworked erotic imagination. It seemed to be too much about the enjoyment of the intruders, and not enough about the pleasure of the girls, so it failed to connect with that part of my brain that relates to pleasure.

However, you did ask!