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[Rhabbi]

I personally like little details like that, but sometimes they are extreneous to the story. After all, how often do you talk about living in whatever city you do?

[anonymouse]

After all, how often do you talk about living in whatever city you do?

Rhabbi also raises a good point here. Given that your audience online is an international one, unless there's a reason for choosing a specific city, ambiguity as to the location can enable readers from everywhere to envisage the setting as somewhere familiar to them.