The Orgainizational Series by Slave Ruthie

[slave ruthie]

Great!

I though you - oops I mean Y/you "forgot" all about it

mmmm Alexa mmmm

Pejanon

lol - how could i forget about it? actually Phil takes little to do with the story these days apart from being terribly practical and saying things like "she must be double-jointed to do that" or "well, by the time they finished they'd be crippled" and other such comments...

...i haveto confess i got seriously stuck and couldn't see how the storyline might work. feedback (both good and bad) and suggestions have really made the difference. i also got into the trap of re-writing and re-re-re-re-re-writing until i couldn't see the story properly. i was told by another Author here to "let it go" and i did...and the sky didn't fall down LOL

i hope to have ch 14 in a workable format very soon but it is, of course subject to change least by the characters T/themselves!

[pejanon]

Hey, I used to write those never ending comics and I LOVED complicated plots and messed up charaters(those are the best lol) and after you just drafted half of it you come up with this great idea you want to string throught the main plot and then it's back to sketches and some more rewriting and ....gaaaah! Yep I know how it goes. Yep let it go (nothing will fall ) - the stories do not have to be joined perfectly.

mmmm

Oh yeah thanx for the nice scene offered in reply to my ahm review.

Have fun

Pej

... and then there is alexa ROFWL

[slave ruthie]

just finished re-drafting chapter 14 of EWD but i had to split it becasue its too long (sorry!) so i think this one's coming in at 15 chapters altogether.

thanks VERY much for the feedback and encouragement

[slave ruthie]

umm there's been a problem with the posting of the chapters and i've re-sent chapters 14 and 15 of Encounter With Destiny to Jinn Sir to sort this out - i'm very sorry and grateful also to the ppl who took their time to point out the inconsistent "jump" between parts of the plot

i hope it works out this time!

[slave ruthie]

thank You again, Jinn Sir, for Your patience and for fixing the end of Encounter With Destiny - You're the BESTEST!!!

[slave ruthie]

i'm working on Harvest of Tears (the 3rd part of the Alexa Trilogy) and i'm not sure if i've got things right with a major character. Rosario is a Domme and She is breaking a maid to become Her personal slave...but i have absolutely no idea what its like to dominate (except on the receiving end) and my Beloved Master says He can't help with how a Female Dominant might behave

so please, Ma'am or Mistress, if You are willing to read over a rough draft and advise this humble slave, please get intouch with me ruthiesb69@yahoo.com or with my Beloved Master philmackay@talk21.com

thank You

[slave ruthie]

i was really, REALLY struggling with chapter 7 of 'Harvest Of Tears' - i simply couldn't emotionally relate to the female Dominant, Rosario. i realize i was writing Her as a theatrical, over-the-top 'Pantomime Domme' who sought others' approval rather than living on Her terms! it was hopeless and my Beloved Master wasn't much use either (please forgive me, Master!), saying "It will be different for women - find a Domme and ask Her opinion''. so i did via this forum, and i'm VERY glad that Mistress Ranai kindly came forward to offer Her advice

Mistress Ranai has re-crafted Rosario into such a formidable, credible Domme that i would readily kneel before Her, if i wasn't already owned in real life LOL!

i wanted to record my gratitude, in particular to Mistress Ranai, and to all the O/other people who have taken the trouble to review and contact me with ideas and advice. Y/you have no idea how valuable this help can be to a novice writer!

please keep telling the A/authors on this site what Y/you like and dislike, what works and what needs to be changed. it's not about praise (although that's very nice to receive) but about learning and sharing O/our love of BDSM