Nikita - you ARE a natural story teller. The parallax view - telling it from 'outside" and from 'inside'
Seems so easy when you do it! Yet another story proving that explicit action is not necesary for hot piece! Wow!

Submissivewife - you've set the stage! Very nice and inviting. Now, what happens on the stage, please?

(AND - you DO know how to tell the story and create an ambient)