Haven't been here in a while but stopped in to see what's up in the Writer's Block. I'm sorry but your arrogance put me off right away and the first few paragraph's were so trite I didn't want to read the rest. I don't have access to the other higher levels so you probably won't read this but here is my advice as a reader... give your characters depth and vulnerability even if the are evil... maybe later on you did but I wasn't drawn in. Good luck and yes, feel free to lambaste my story *s* - ash