Quote Originally Posted by Venom View Post
Thank you for your comment, lucy, especially since the story is not to your taste.
Visualising the main character's thoughts as italic lines is indeed a stylistic experiment of mine.
I like your stylistic experiment, but maybe you should warn the reader with a note at the beginning of the story? I prefer to use single quotes and a "thought tag" before or after. Haven't gotten any complaints on that yet.