Just as an example:
Quote Originally Posted by Skarlet View Post
“If you’re so eager, why don’t you come hump my boot?”

I froze, completely caught off guard, contemplating the seriousness of her tone. I wasn’t able to think for long before she continued,

“It wasn’t a suggestion, slut. Come here.”

The stern quality of her voice sent shivers down my spine and I quickly did as I was told.
Looks better as:

“If you’re so eager, why don’t you come hump my boot?”

I froze, completely caught off guard, contemplating the seriousness of her tone. I wasn’t able to think for long before she continued, “It wasn’t a suggestion, slut. Come here.”

Or:


“If you’re so eager, why don’t you come hump my boot?”

I froze, completely caught off guard, contemplating the seriousness of her tone. I wasn’t able to think for long.

She continued, “It wasn’t a suggestion, slut. Come here.”

I am not a punctuation Nazi at all, but those ways are less distracting to even readers like me.